Siheyuan: Are All the Birds Trying to Rob My House? I Snatched Huairu into the Bridal Chamber!

If you don't want to write about the system, don't write about it. When you see more than 320 chapters, you only get out of the system a few times at the beginning, and then it's all trivial things. There is a system to cut off people. As a result, you run away and put people in jail. You are not writing love scenes every day. You write love scenes and Mao's period. A systematic person is still afraid of this and that, afraid of the wind and dare not go to college. The plot is boring. After reading more than 320 chapters, there are only a few things. The first uncle went to jail and was expelled, the deaf old lady died, the second uncle was expelled and dug out excrement, He Yu lived in the army, Jia Dongxu went to prison, and then two of them became eunuchs, and there was nothing else. Shashahou just wrote a few cameos, and your uncle came out when he was needed, but never saw him when he was useless. The main character circled Qin Huairu all day long. I really don't understand the meaning of a man who only circles around one woman all day long. Other people's writings either have many female protagonists, are passionate, or are just about developing your own power and construction. You haven't done anything at all. There is no core point. If you don't have it, you will just circle around Qin Huaru. Anyway, I can't stand it. Bye.

For a perfect work, I can only give you 0.1 Points

Holy Mother+Confidence Fee+Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles The author wrote a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle, I admire him! Dragon King Style

The logic is wrong. The protagonist's father is a veteran. His job was cut off, and his house was cut off. He even saved the cut-off person and even lost himself, and then lost his pension. You really dare to write. I suggest the author get a calculator or something. At the very least, he has started to figure out how much money he has. How much money he has and how many things he can do. The system gives 200 plus a few centimeters of steel in his pocket. He takes Qin Huairu to eat hotpot + a 200 yuan bicycle + a piece of clothing + a gift of 10 yuan. Author, please calculate how much you have spent. How did you manage to spend 200 yuan to do so many things? I am so angry that it is nothing.

The plot is very illogical. The author never fried fish when he was a child.

Let's be honest. What is the relationship between Yi Zhonghai and the author? It should be your elder. Otherwise, when you ask for a house, the security section chief Tan Wu will be there. Yi Zhonghai should have been exposed a long time ago, and this matter was ignored and the author found countless excuses to minimize the matter. As a result, the victim swallowed his anger. It seemed like the quarrel with Jiajia was full of excitement and passion, but it was just a small fight, it was really fun, and you didn't inspire it at all. We readers just wanted to see what happened to Yi Zhonghai when he was punished, and we wanted to see what happened to Danwu when he was punished. But you didn't write about it, you only wrote about punching Jia Zhang.

I was hooked after reading the first few chapters. I had the land deed in hand, and my uncle was the head of the Military Control Commission. Your house that was robbed by the Jia family can definitely be returned by clearing the road. Look at what is written. First, the uncle took more than ten people to the compound in a hurry, and then kicked the door without knocking. Then a group of people broke into Jia's house and smashed it. This is the bandit's visit

A bunch of loopholes are just water characters that spell out links.

The plot is too loose. They said they would pay a thousand yuan, but both the author and the protagonist would forget about it. I am speechless.