I'm a Pure-Yang Oyster, Laying Low as a Big Shot in the Jie Sect

First you advance to a lower-grade innate deity, then to a higher-grade innate being; first you advance to the late-stage Profound Immortal, then to the mid-stage Profound Immortal. Have you even looked at what you're writing?

The cultivation levels are completely nonsensical, a complete mess. Leaving aside the earlier levels, even the one currently being read has already reached the late True Immortal stage, only to be upgraded to the mid-True Immortal stage. The starting point is also inconsistent; the character was already a lower-level innate deity, then absorbed some kind of solar essence, and now starts again…

There was a retcon error; the author couldn't even remember the protagonist's exact level.

The writing is too messy, with repetitions in the beginning and end, the background and cultivation levels.

The boundaries are reversed, the project is unfinished, and it's being rushed.

Nice

The plot is alright.

It's all messed up, can you tidy it up?

This is completely nonsensical! A serious attempt at rambling nonsense!

It felt a bit anticlimactic. The last four pages felt like they were just rushing to finish it off.