Embers of Gunfire

The plot is quite good, it's World War I and World War II Germany in a different world. It's a pity that the author can no longer write. I think the last chapter is well written. The author contrasts the final encounters between the head of state and the protagonist, cleverly expressing the social situation. There is also the last paragraph of the head of state salute, which shows the emotion of "the veteran is not dead, but just withered". Maybe this is the sense of honor of the military?

It is a good book. It can describe the war in detail. Even with the system, it only appears occasionally and does not affect the balance. The scenes of meeting famous people in history are relatively natural. The only flaw is the rushed ending. It is regrettable that the last few chapters advance too fast. I can also feel the author's difficulties. It is highly recommended.

Seeing it now, it feels like it's basically the history of World War II. The storyline should still be unfolding. The sentences are basically smooth, there are not too many typos, and there are not too many garbled words. The basic plot is reasonable and the logic is generally fine. Can recommend

The writing is okay, but the author has only written very short stories before, so I feel a little panicked.