With Disasters Everywhere, What's Wrong with Stockpiling a Little?

It's very interesting. It's much better than many apocalyptic novels on the popular list. It can be read on and on. The heroine is not a virgin and has a growth-oriented character. I haven't seen a male protagonist yet. I have been looking for an infinite-streaming apocalyptic novel for a long time. It is a natural disaster survival novel and it can definitely become a hit! Big cheers for the author!

Write quickly!!! Ahhhh, it's not enough to read and write!!! Ahhhhhhh why is it not finished? Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh good from me to keep up the writing style!! Ahhhhhhhhhh!!! Come and see everyone!! Really good-looking!! Recommended by a fifteen-year-old bookworm!!

I was deceived into it. When I read the title, I thought it was about survival in the apocalypse. In the end, it turned into an unlimited game. Except for the first few copies, which are about survival, the latter are about decryption, making money, and completing tasks. These are the types that I hate the most. I want to say something to those who come next. I don't like such barriers.

Write quickly! Write quickly!

After watching the first world, those plots made me very uncomfortable. It was like I wanted to write about stocking up but I couldn't write much, so I added a conflict, but the conflict is a very NC plot. Do you have to write some wretched man in love with a female character? I added teammates inexplicably and then ended it hastily. The reason why it didn't look bad is because the beginning was good, but the more I read later, I became more and more speechless😓

Some of the heroine's actions seem a bit stupid, and the writing is too long. It should be written a lot when it can be said in one or two sentences, and the heroine's behavior is a bit too holy. She should be killed.

There are a lot of flaws. . Do you always feel a little bit shocked?? I don't feel this way when reading other unlimited novels. Moreover, the positioning is also very confusing, and the purpose is unclear. It is an ordinary infinite flow novel but with a binding space (??). Countless typos + disordered word order, oh, there are so many flaws, I don't even know where to start.

The first round of the game was a bit unbearable. The beginning was quite novel, but I felt that the heroine's behavior was very speechless. The first time he was robbed, no one was killed, but the second time he let him go. Each time he practiced shooting for three hours, and then the first time he actually fired five gunmen, he was injured. Others have nothing to eat, and the heroine eats strong hot pot barbecue and causes others to come to her in trouble (the heroine's way to save her life at this time is to have a gun, but this country allows buying guns, others will also have them, and they are so confident, and have good physical fitness, but they are not masters yet). Also, there are 500 people in a dungeon, 500, not 5 million. In a city, the heroine is always surrounded by players. How small is this city? It is a survival game, but the pressure of environmental survival has not been reflected. People are always fighting and killing each other.

The beginning was good, but the more I wrote, the more fantasy and digression became, and it directly super-evolved into a fast-travel script. The later stage had nothing to do with natural disasters, it was just a matter of fighting and killing dungeons.

The heroine is a virgin and has a low IQ. She was initially given the character of a top student before the end of the world. After the end of the world, she kept describing how cautious she was, and then she still ate delicious food such as barbecue and hot pot even though she knew someone was coming to search the villa area. I gave up the article and couldn't find any motivation to continue reading.