The Cultivation Master Is a Black-Hearted Lotus

The first half is indeed relatively young in writing, and there are too many details, but the second half is getting better and better, and overall it is a good read. The male protagonist can be regarded as the first love brain dragon in the beginning. Fortunately, both sides went in both directions, and the Lord God responded to him, and the ending is still good.

Beautiful, worth seeing

It was fine at first, but there were only ten exclamation marks in the next ten sentences, not to mention the highlights. There were exclamation marks after every paragraph. Is there no other symbol? 😓

When I read Chapter 142, I couldn't hold on anymore. It's so long-winded. What makes me most uncomfortable is that basically every chapter emphasizes the heroine's ninth-level spiritual roots and physical talent. I don't know how I persisted for so many chapters. If the author was good at writing, this novel would definitely be good, but now I can't stand it 😂

There is a male protagonist, so I can only skip to watch Revenge. The introduction is misleading. Fortunately, I read the comments, otherwise I would have wasted so much time. Not as good as the male protagonist...

It is indeed a work of practice.

This book has quite a lot of shortcomings, but the author's first book is already a very good book for practicing writing. The flaws do not hide the good points! Disadvantages: The character of the heroine is thin and unlikable. The writing structure in the early stage is very poor and very verbose. In the later stage, the heroine's talents are also described. The whole book also has a faint misogyny. However, it was written by the author a few years ago, so it can be ignored. Advantages: The writing is relatively smooth, the writing style is average, the writing style is good, it does not deviate from the tone of Su Shuangwen, the rhythm is good, and the characters of the supporting characters are all very good! Very pleasing! I hope the author will get better and better!

Very wordy

I've read more than thirty chapters and it's still pretty good.

I really like the author's books. I've read the other two books, and now I'm reading this earliest one. The writing is very good.