I'm Leaving, Your Majesty. Don't Come Crying and Begging Me to Return

Didn't they go on a two-year mission? Now they're saying the child is Xiao Yang's? Are you kidding me?

I'd give it a so-so rating. The romance was written too abruptly, like children playing house—it's incredibly childish. The characters always seem to fall in love for no reason at all.

This is a pure cuckold simp novel with illogical plot, poor writing, and a mediocre storyline. The characters' emotional development is also bland. Putting everything else aside, the female supporting character returns from a two-year military campaign pregnant, and then claims the daughter is the male lead's? What, can the male lead remotely grant sexual favors? While it's true you shouldn't use your brain when reading these kinds of novels, you can't really treat readers like idiots, right? Furthermore, the male supporting character also believes the daughter is his, which already proves the female supporting character is cheating. The male lead and the female supporting character are still entangled for so long—isn't that just disgusting? The male lead keeps saying he's broken off all ties and doesn't love her anymore, yet he's still being nice to the female supporting character and clinging to her (even if it's mostly due to her persistent pursuit), making him seem like a complete simp. A direct negative review, no further comment.

The writing is too straightforward, and the characters' emotional shifts are too rapid.

It's well-written, keep up the good work, author!

After reading more than ten chapters, the overall impression is that it's a female-oriented novel, and I can only describe it with one idiom: love, hate, and grudges.

The emotional build-up was too weak.

It's a story about a simp transforming into a normal person, but unfortunately, even after the transformation, he's still a little swordsman.