The Apocalypse Begins, and I Control Lightning from the Start

Well written! The beginning is about betrayal, being cheated on, and rebirth (though it could have been different, like dying in a boss fight). Unlike the usual ones, there are no cheat codes, no system, and no erotic content. The protagonist even has teammates. The fight scenes are well-done in terms of detail; it's not padded, at least not in the beginning.

It was okay at the beginning, but it ended up being a complete mess, a complete mess, a complete mess.

Not bad, decisive and ruthless.

The speech was rambling and the ending was too abrupt.

It's written in a very messy way; it's tiring to read.

The ending was too LO

A flood of negative emotions can make a person withdrawn and indifferent.

It ended abruptly with over a hundred chapters.