In America, I Started with a Chinese-Style Haunted House

At present, I have an adventure house with at least 78 points out of 10. The two points missing are that the previous plot is not perfect enough, there are too many words in "Others Are Water", and there is not enough supplementary setting here. There's not much of a problem with the writing, and the atmosphere is still there. That's it for now, I'll tell you what to write later.

There aren't enough details, it's boring to watch, and there's no sense of immersion. I feel like the author himself wrote it to be scary, but it's not scary at all to watch.