After Divorcing My Celebrity Wife, I Became the World's Richest Man

How do I put it? The divorce written at the beginning is not very thorough, unlike other books that are too slow. This is a good review. The development at the beginning is also good from a restaurant to a small shop. However, after opening the store, the skills given are too complicated and too many, as if you are invincible all at once, which leads to confusion in the main line. At one time, you are helping the police solve a case, at another time you are surviving in the wilderness, and at another time you are racing. Although what I say here is Although it is confusing, it is okay that the author did not spend a lot of space to write these, otherwise it is really putting the cart before the horse. Although some of this was corrected in the later period, it is a deduction of points. It would be better if the restaurant part could be written better, instead of interspersing various small branches to force the progress, such as going to Kyoto to develop and so on, but I still give it a good review and hope that the author can write better in the future.

It's okay, but after reading more than 200 chapters, I can't stand it. It's mainly because of the additions in the middle. He is obviously a food cook. One moment he helps the police solve crimes, the next he goes to the wilderness to survive, and the next he treats diseases and saves people. It's just a mess, it's too poisonous.

The first part was okay, but the plot has been very confusing since I went abroad. Many places here and there seemed to be spliced ​​together. What was originally a good food article suddenly turned into a hodgepodge of everything. I didn't even have the heart to read anymore. The chapters I saw were like a pot of Chongqing hot pot, this swish, that swish, and the ratings were just like that!

The author may have some misunderstanding about tens of thousands of kilograms. Several people sell tens of thousands of kilograms of food a day, and one person has to perform multiple tasks. Robots can't do it, let alone people. Although writing requires unconstrained imagination, overstepping the limit will only make people miserable.

Something doesn't feel right when I look at it...

It's finally clean. How can such a mess 📖 be rated so high?

The next two hundred chapters won't look good

A good food article turned into a hodgepodge

, I only see him working all day long, and I don't see him mentioning that there is a washroom in the dining car. He is frying things every day, and his whole body smells of sweat. How can he sell things?