Cutting the Deer

Well, how should I say it? To say how ugly this book is, I don't think it is. But to say it looks good, I can't see it anyway. Maybe I'm not used to this way of writing? I felt that there was something inexplicable about the writing, as if it was mystical. I can't tell, I can't stand it anyway.

It's rare to see such a fascinating work from the beginning. After reading too many shoddy and entertaining articles, this work is really amazing. I've only read more than ten chapters and I can't help but recommend it. I really don't want this kind of work to be buried.

The male protagonist is a sheep-tailed man who adheres to his masculine virtues, the villain's IQ is worrying, and the prince cannot defeat a wild child at the border. The invincible equipment is still cleaning up the miscellaneous fish one by one, pretending to be sophisticated. The second young lady of the Pei family, as mentioned earlier, was so powerful, but when she returned to Chang'an's house, she was nothing.

The beginning and ending really attracted me, but after reading a few chapters, I found that there was too much nonsense. There is a lot of nonsense about cologne, but cologne has flavor. Most people can't describe that kind of taste. The author portrays the protagonist as intelligent and almost demonic, but lacking in skill, which makes me feel a bit pretentious and mystical. I wonder if the author rarely writes martial arts works, so his ability is a bit poor.

If this book was about foreigners trying to infiltrate the Central Plains and disrupt China, then at least it would be logically logical and the plot would be exciting. If it's a fight for world supremacy or an official struggle... Or a military-based battle to save the country, then you don't have to look at it. The frontier army becomes a survival tool for the protagonist group in the early stage, a tool to fend off disasters. They are even randomly killed by the protagonist group in order to ensure the lives of the enemy. They may be blamed for harming the protagonist in the later stage. But is killing the frontier army performing military duties not treason? No matter how round it is in the later stage, I don't think the protagonist can come back! Abandoned! This is not how the feelings of family and country are written. Even if you wrote that they couldn't defeat the two Turks and were killed, I can understand that you didn't help anyone, but you not only did business with them, but also helped them kill the Tang army. I think the protagonist of this book is a foreigner!

I deleted the positive review I gave before and re-reviewed it negatively. I must say that the writing was really good and it was quite enjoyable to read. Later, when I arrived in Youzhou, all the women wanted to be with the protagonist. Even before, they even liked other people and immediately turned around and hugged the protagonist just because they met him. Although I was speechless, I could accept it. At least I didn't want to sleep with a girl when I saw her like other authors. That was really disgusting. Then when we arrived in Chang'an, the first thing we saw was Miss Pei. The sisters were at odds with each other before. Then the author forced her to explain and practice more, and actually accepted her. Now the real three wives and four concubines began. The most important thing is that she has done everything, but a man shrinks back, as if he is the one who suffers. This is quite disgusting. Then I saw that he was regarded as the fifth prince and sent a message asking him to help get the protagonist himself. It was quite brainless. Then everyone in the world with any brains would know that the two of them were wearing the same pair of trousers, so why did they do this? Are you forcing me to give you props? It started out as a martial arts novel, then turned into a side story, and then started to move towards fantasy and immortality. After that, I couldn't stand it anymore, and I lost my expectations. I originally wanted to abandon the book, but then I remembered that I gave it a good review at the beginning, so I came back to change the negative review.

The writing is good at the beginning, but the combat power system gradually collapses later on. This may be a common problem among online novel authors. At first, when I saw a group of masters needing to cooperate in killing people, I thought I had encountered a conscience novel. Forget it, I really couldn't read it anymore.

This book is generally okay. But stallions are the biggest poisonous point for me. I don't like too many lower body scenes in novels, just like I don't like pure love in pornographic novels. Other problems are the most common problem in online articles, large blocks of dialogue. Many times I just skip over it without any impact.

It's very beautiful, and each chapter is very long. The author has put great care into it. Very good

The writing style is deliberately mysterious, but it is indeed much better than other chronicles on the Internet. For example, I don't know what it means, but the experience record of a wealthy young master is simple and clear. What you think of as a wild kid from the valley who buries corpses is actually two 8-grades in a second (you can use it as a plug-in, a system, a super hidden sect). If he wants people and money, whatever equipment he lacks, everyone around him will provide it for him.