Pingtiance

The progress of the protagonist in the early stages of this book is a bit slow, but the intrigues and intrigues are quite exciting. The descriptions of the various supporting characters are too deliberate, and on the contrary, they overshadow the main characters. In short, you need to read it slowly, it is not a fun article.

The first hundred chapters are okay, but the plot drags on later. After the protagonist becomes a powerful person, he reveals his heart to the people who follow him for no reason, as if it is silly and sweet. . . On the contrary, his best friend who appeared in the first few dozen chapters knew nothing. . . The relationship between the characters is extremely confusing, or in other words, extremely simple If the writing is not good, don't write so many characters. . . His best friend who appeared in the first chapter has reached chapter 400, and he hasn't even been given a second chance to appear. In Chapter 400, there are seven or eight people who follow the pig's feet. Then I didn't say why they were there. During the first war, I couldn't see any of them in seven or eight chapters. Wang Pingyang, the second Nantianyuan, appeared once after he was inexplicably conquered. . . Wang Pingyang learned the Demon Sect Kung Fu and then realized and reflected on it. He thought it was a more important branch. Why did he feel ashamed for killing two people, and then admired him when he watched a hand-to-hand fight with pig's feet? Chapter 400 has passed, and there has not been a single life-or-death battle. Instead, he has subdued a bunch of people who don't match up with each other, and there is not a single enemy. . . Then I thought it was time to add an array master profession, so I changed the swordsman endorsement from the valet to the array master successor. .

Not bad, but a little worse than a fairy or a demon.

Nice

The protagonist who seems to be passionate and passionate is actually a heartless and hypocrite. They are indifferent to their parents, but a random passer-by will express their feelings to them. You are really stupid, not pretending to be stupid.

In terms of story outline and context, this is a very good novel, especially suitable for scripting, film and television dramas. It unfolds from a young man whose family fortune suddenly fell, against the backdrop of a desolate world, and progresses through the Civil War, with characters vividly presented one by one. The whole book can be roughly summarized into three main chapters, namely the Civil War, the Western Party Decision, and the Hidden Black Hand. It is appropriate to throw out a new context and unlock new characters when each chapter is about to be finalized. In the first chapter, it mainly describes how the protagonist cultivates and survives step by step from the bottom, unites words and deeds, and impresses and influences the people around him with his life and faith. By the beginning of the second chapter, with the merits of the Civil War, the protagonist has grown from a down-and-out young man in Huangya Realm to an invincible Divine Power Zhenxi General in the Divine Mind Realm. The change in the character's position brings about the change in the style of the text content. This chapter focuses more on the battle of resourcefulness to improve the three-dimensional image of the protagonist. It is also the process of the protagonist becoming more mature. At this point, the protagonist is no longer limited to influencing the people around him, but has the ability to participate in influencing the entire world. By the third chapter, when everyone in the world thought that the Queen Mother of the Southern Dynasty or the Demon Sect was about to become invincible, the hidden black hands gradually appeared in the world, but the new round of King Mo was eventually eliminated by the protagonist and like-minded partners. As the plot of the book progresses, many vivid characters have been successfully created, such as the proud and fearless He Xiuxian, the perverse and violent Queen Mother of the Southern Dynasties, the awakened Demon Sect, Xiao Yan who lets go of his obsession, the mentally ill Shen Nian, etc. The description of love, rejoicing, and life and death emotions is completely understandable, but it is not artificial or pretentious. It is a little regrettable that as the plot unfolds and "the world becomes bigger", in the third chapter, due to the growth and strength level of the "New Demon King" is too high, the protagonist has to make a leap in strength in the later plot, which seems a bit abrupt. Therefore, in the final war, in order to calm or not amplify this point, the book uses collective coordinated operations to achieve victory✌🏻 There is no personal heroism, and the ending does not elaborate on the protagonist's momentum as the best in the world. Just right, I like it. ---Separating line---- What I like most about this book is its delicacy. Like all the protagonists, Lin Yi also received guidance and support from senior experts. But it was just a few words of guidance from Shen Yue, and it was just an exercise from He Xiuxian, who he had never met. The protagonist relied more on his own tenacity to grow into a towering giant step by step. As for the description of emotions, whether it is Chen Baowuan and Yuan Yan's admiration for Lin Yi, Xiao Shufei and Lin Yi's love, or Bai Luyue's appreciation of Rong Yi, and the life and death of her companions and comrades, there is no trace of emotion at all. So very good. I like the character He Xiuxian very much, and I also like the Demon Sect very much.

Overall, it's pretty good. The supporting characters are well-drawn, but the main character is a bit short. Especially at the end, Mo Zong, like the protagonist Lin Yi, is more like a supporting role

It's a really cool story. The protagonist never loses from the beginning to the end. Those who can't beat him are all made teammates by him. The opponents are all not very smart and don't think as much as the protagonist. The protagonist has to point out the problem and then become convinced and become teammates? ? Also, none of the defeated opponents were tough. They just said whatever they asked without cheating at all. I was really speechless. I suspected it was written by the gunman.

It's too long-winded. The first few dozen chapters are good, but the later chapters become more long-winded and difficult to read. There are too many explanatory contents and fighting scenes, which cover up the development of the plot. This makes it a cliché of relying on fighting to make up the word count in ordinary Internet articles. Fighting is the easiest way to make up the word count in Internet articles.

Highly recommend this book!