Da Qin: the Little Lovely Wife from a Poor Family

It's good-looking. It can be said to be the best-looking one I've seen in this genre, but it's too short. (｡･㉨･｡)ﾉ♡ I love you so much

The Qin Dynasty is an imaginary world

After reading more than 30 chapters, I feel that there is nothing special about it. I feel that I am living for daily necessities. The progress is too slow. I also read a few chapters later. The protagonist is a doctor. You can write about his career (for example, using the combination of traditional Chinese and Western medicine to treat diseases is a line that makes him famous) and emotions (such as For example, the daily relationship with the heroine is another auxiliary line) Whether it is a single heroine, dual heroines, or multiple heroines, if the protagonist is a doctor, it will be written down all day long. In ancient times, the greater the reputation, the status will be much higher, and it will be easier to make money accordingly. I won't say much more. I hope the author can polish the article.

This is so beautiful. I love it so much. I hope the author will work harder.

I completely don't understand what you are trying to write about. Daily life in the early stage and direct battle in the later stage. Also, there is a problem with the character's impression. You wrote Xia Xiaoruan at the beginning, and the introduction is also based on Xia Xiaoruan, but the whole book is basically about Mo Li. Who is this heroine? It's too confusing. If you talk about two heroines, in the later stage, I don't even want to write about Xia Xiaoruan. Then isn't this a character that you pulled out to attract readers? I was deceived by the introduction. I thought it was about a single female protagonist plus a fortune, but after reading more than 150 chapters, I wanted to send Mo Li away several times but refused to do so. The male protagonist must maintain a pure love character, but he doesn't want to send the harem away. This is a contradictory plot

This is for those who read the bad reviews. I have finished reading the latest chapter 111. It is not bad. If you can read it, I don't know if it will fill in the gaps in the future.

Grandma, what kind of novel is this? Is it a single heroine or multiple heroines? If you have a single female protagonist, you shouldn't write so many other female supporting characters. If you want multiple female protagonists, you're like this. Anyway, the first female protagonist you chose is relatively average. I can only say that this image is very good, but it is not good to use her as the first female protagonist.

Cede territory but don't move the people away. It's very funny, and there are people in the South who shouldn't let soldiers kill people casually. Do the two big countries not have a single smart person? Very enlightening. Several big countries wrote like tribes and slipped away.

Sauce cannot be brewed in winter.

The plot is good, but the male protagonist is not very good. He thinks about all kinds of messy things all day long. What do you want to do to make money? You make soy sauce in an era when there is no onion, ginger, and garlic. What do you think? It is estimated that the male protagonist was not doing very well before time travel, and he obviously had no business acumen.