Cultivating Immortality in the Beast World: I Win Over Beastmen, Lie Low, and Ascend

It looks good, but every male protagonist is seriously injured and saved by the female protagonist and then get married. Then Qingmei runs out and wants to kill or challenge the female protagonist. Then the female protagonist gently handles and puts away a large number of admirers of each male protagonist... No matter how provocative or harmful the other party is, the plot feels a bit repetitive and not very satisfying...

It doesn't look good at all! Although there are no old routines anymore, some book friends above are right. Every time I keep the villain, clan leader, clan leader, etc. These characters are not decisive and wise at all, and they are not like the beast clan at all. I have read more than a hundred chapters, and the emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists are okay, but the main plot is not good at all. For the sake of my breasts, I have to skip reading it. If it doesn't work again, I will change T_T

It's not bad, it's a very innovative novel about the world of beasts. The female patron Gu Shuang is also quite different. The beast world is her first life, and then she goes to the world of immortality, and then returns to the first life where she died in vain. Therefore, her character is destined to be unyielding and self-reliant, so those who want to read The Lovely Wife should be careful. The article has a lot of foreshadowing. The heroine is not a heartthrob, and her emotional line is quite logical. Then there are some small settings that are outstanding, such as being able to practice in your mind. But there is one thing that really affects reading the article, that is, one thing has to be divided into many parts, that is, divided into many chapters. Why can't we concentrate on writing one thing? This kind of multi-line parallelism and no progressive writing method makes the article lose its structure. For example, I actually wrote the part about Gu Shuang and the Fat-headed Fish many times. I went with the monkey, went by myself, and went with Yexing. Every time I found some clues, I would write about other things. Overall, it seemed chaotic. I had no memory after reading it because it happened too many times. I guess the author may want to go step by step, but please consider the reader's memory. The context is really unclear.

It's quite tiring to watch the villainous clowns jumping around, then trying to clean them up over and over again when he's about to die, and then the clowns run away and cause trouble again.

Compared with other beast world novels, it is quite interesting. The heroine's character setting is not very cliche. Good work, author! (Can there be more... That is, I read it in one go. ('-ωก̀))

After reading more than a hundred chapters, the setting of the heroine is quite good, but the other female orcs are all the beast husbands who like the heroine and want to steal them, and then they are always against the heroine. Why can't the plot develop without engaging in female competition?

💐I really recommend everyone to read this book This book belongs to the type of cultivating immortals in the world of beasts, which is relatively novel nowadays, and the status of females in this book is very high. Let me introduce the characters next. 🌸Heroine: Gu Shuang (Snake Clan) It turns out that the heroine lived in this world of beasts, but she disappeared because of a snake. He went to the Immortal Cultivation World to cultivate immortality, but failed to ascend successfully. After being struck to death by lightning, he returned to the original beast world, and then cultivated immortality. Superpowers: fire system, wind system... (Anyway, I will add more to my blind guessing in the future) IQ is online, strong woman, only trusts her own people (her best husband) 🍀Yehen (Snake Clan) He is Shuang's first beast husband and the leader of the snake clan's predator team. Because Mei saved the hero, he and Shuang got started. Power: Ice system He is gentle and considerate towards his own people, an all-around daddy, and feels extremely safe. 🍀Aqing(Fox Clan) He is Shuang's second beast husband, the eldest son of the Fox clan. In order to find two things in the forest, he was cut off by Shuang twice, betrayed by his subordinates, fell off a cliff and lost his memory, and met Shuang. Because of her bet with the system, Shuang rescued him and accepted him as the second beast master. Ability: (I forgot, it seems to let others stay for a while) He talks sweetly to others and has a venomous tongue. Under Shuang's training, he starts to be kind to his own people. 🍀Chen Ye (Wolf Clan) He is Shuang's third beast husband. Because his ear hair is golden, he was abandoned by his tribe and met Shuang. Power: Metal The big sunny wolf and the little puppy 🍀(Stay tuned) Every character of the author touches my heart, I love it so much! 🌷🌷🌷 Recommendation index:⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Finally, I hope the author can add more and more updates!!! (Seeking refinement)

I have been practicing immortality for 500 years, but I am still weak. I don't see it.

Love this novel. Urgent to update. Urgent to update.

I don't know why I have to keep that villain, time and time again, and every time he can be rescued and then go against the heroine, can't I solve it directly? I feel frustrated watching it