A Beautiful Journey on the Immortal Path

The plot is intertwined, and there are so few typos that there are only a few words in the whole story. The heroine: Rong Shiguang, I really love it, who doesn't like cute glutinous rice dumplings? Time cultivation will be relatively slow compared to the protagonists in other novels, but the foundation is laid, and the main thing is to consolidate the foundation. Now Shi Shi is still a few years old. In fact, I don't like such articles about cultivating immortals, but this article really poked me 😍😍😍 There will be some people in the article who are jealous of time and spread rumors. Regarding this, I can only say: Don't they all practice cultivation? So free every day😶 In fact, the routines are still the same, there will be some differences, but it makes people want to stop. I like this feeling that makes people get excited. The only fly in the ointment is that it is being serialized... My bookshelf is full of serialized books. It's really sad. I want to cry every day while waiting for the update😭 The comment section is so quiet that I thought I was the only one reading this book, but it is really a good book. At present, it seems that there is no male protagonist, time is still young, and there is no rush (preferably not hehe😁)

The only drawback is that the update is too slow. It takes several days to read one or two chapters. Basically, I have to wait two days to update one chapter. It is really too slow. I can't wait any longer and am ready to give up. If there are others like me, please avoid it.

It was quite interesting when I first read it. Starting from about chapter 200, I felt that the author's writing style was fragmented, as if two people were writing a book.

It's still very good-looking, but don't you think it's weird that the heroine is just a few years old and she comes out to experience it? And she has never met other children of her own age, so it feels even weirder. Even if the author wants to highlight the heroine, it shouldn't be like this.

The first part is okay, but the second part seems to have been written by a different person. They always say what would happen if the heroine was not the one who experienced this incident. Only the heroine can save the day. It feels like the narration is intrusive. And it seems that the heroine often encounters strong winds and waves, but the actual narrative is very bland, at least that's how it feels to me. I was so bland that I just listened to the book after reading this novel, and listened to it while playing games. The most annoying thing was when I heard that there were 400 chapters. I was still thinking that there were only 8 chapters left, and I guess it was just enough to end it. But as I was listening, I suddenly "finished the whole book"??? It didn't even have a hasty ending, but it suddenly disappeared. It couldn't even be called a bad ending. I was really, really annoyed by this!!!

Please update quickly, I haven't updated in a few days.

Why do I always write so slowly?

If it's not finished, there's nothing more to go on. I really don't know how to evaluate it.

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Why is the ending so hasty😭