Wen Dao: I Will Forever Be Remembered with My Poems

The writing is messy and I couldn't stand it for the first time.

A stallion

Childish stallion

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It's a mess, the background is very broad, the author doesn't know how to write, it's rubbish

The protagonist is powerful, but he still works as a doorman for others, instead of establishing his own business? In other novels, according to the development of the protagonist's strength, even if he is a son-in-law at the beginning, he will later establish his own business. I don't know what the author was thinking. The origin of the protagonist is obviously not simple, but he still made the master and servant of the two women so jealous? They forcibly suppressed the protagonist, and even arrested the protagonist's mother. Reasonable? ?

The story of Stallion, the world view and structure are in a mess. Before the first map is cleared, a group of maps come in and the map is not strong enough. Even the son of the avenue cannot open up all the avenues at the same time. The avenues are written as if they are exercises. There is no logic at all! I can't stand it anymore, it's garbage

What does the author think? The world view of the shop is quite big. The main character is a novice. He has the strength of an ant and lives in the world of dinosaurs. There is something wrong with the overall concept and structure.

Why do all the protagonists in this kind of novel look like dogs? Just listen to what others say and do whatever others ask you to do. A good guy can really talk nonsense.

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