Douluo V: Forced Kiss by Qian Renxue at the Beginning

There are really too many typos. The protagonist talks about everything, especially about Bibi Dong. If you open a harem, you can also accept Bibi Dong and let Bibi Dong say it himself. Wouldn't that be better?

I can't understand what is written. Qian Renxue actually knew the plot and went undercover. Every con man knows how to make the protagonist stronger as soon as possible, but in the end, he still let his granddaughter go undercover to waste time. I really can't figure out what's the point?

This is the first time I've seen a novel with such poor writing. I can't even read the broken sentences.

The author should retake primary school, learn how to use punctuation marks, and clarify your sentence segmentation. There are so many typos. Have you graduated from kindergarten?

Typos everywhere

Good

What are you writing about? Level improvement and soul ring absorption are not clearly stated as they are all done in one stroke. The plot is also a mess.

Harem sex doesn't look good. It's okay in the early stage, but not so good in the later stage. It is recommended to have a single female protagonist. Love Qian Renxue forever.

Good guy, the sentences are randomly broken up and the punctuation marks are not used well. When I read it, I thought I had read it wrong. There are a lot of typos. Didn't the author check it when he finished writing? Or do you mean that you don't even read the comments or make any changes?

The identity of the time traveler is revealed at the beginning and the heroine's daily writing is not good, she's like a dog licker