My Jianghu Past

In fact, the sense of anticipation for the conflict in the story is not as good as the previous one, but the character creation and emotional rendering feel better than the one in northern Myanmar. The pace is not deliberately accelerated, but it is not draggy either. It is very comfortable to read. There are no obscure words and no long explanations. There is occasionally eroticism but it is not too abrupt. In the big dyeing vat of Jianghu, it would feel fake if you keep oneself as pure as jade. I hope that it will be stable in the future. The story can be unfolded on multiple levels, striving to describe a chaotic but real Jianghu! Come on!

Tell me how I feel! I just saw the new book today, and I read the latest chapter in one go. It was very smooth, and there was nothing I couldn't understand. The writing is concise, humorous, and you can feel a little bit of the truth of life while laughing. This kind of reading experience is really great! In addition, hehe, Da Da's racing skills did not disappoint me at all, haha, it's sexy but not vulgar, it's really good! I am a huge fan of the last book! Compared with the previous book, although the conflict is not that big, the story is much better. I hope Dengyan can continue his efforts and write better stories! By the way, can you please give me a character name? Chu Jian, male, about thirty years old, preferably a decent character. Readers, please give it a like and let the author see it! Thank you!

After reading about 150 chapters, I quit. I wonder why novels nowadays can't be written without women? Chapter 150, the younger brother's sister, the manager in the factory, the manager's niece, the eldest brother's sister, the lady from the foot washing city, and the sister-in-law, all around these people every day, everything is related to these women, I don't know about the story of the underworld What do you want to express? Friendship is all used on women. My elder brother values ​​him so much. Every day, because of the woman's mistakes, I don't feel the multiple feelings of friendship. Every day, my sister-in-law, my own brother is still lying in bed and can't get out of the bed. He is a gangster. . .

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This book is about the underworld in Daojiao Town, Dongguan City. It is very realistic and I really enjoyed reading it because I used to be a gangster in Pinghu Town, Shenzhen for 5 years, and I went from having nothing to being worth tens of millions. Then to nothing and then to heavy work. I don't know what the result will be for Fang Yan! Expect

The psychological activities are described very well, the ambiguity is just right, and the human nature is also portrayed very well. I praise it very much.

The novel is really not clumsy. I have been reading it for a few days and the chapters are funny. All I can say is - this is a good book!

It seems so useless. Women are saving him. Either women shield him from the gun, or women go to jail for her, or women die trying to reveal information to him. It's very offensive to women, and it's all coincidental, and it's a bit inexplicable, and it's a bit intellectual. At the beginning, it was acceptable, not bad, and watchable, but the more I watched, the more it became a bit unsatisfactory. It felt a bit watery, and I didn't savor and ponder it carefully. But this only represents my personal opinion! This article is remarkable, but the more I read it, the more uncomfortable I feel. Maybe the article needs to be polished carefully, but this is just my personal feeling after reading it. There are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand people, and each one has a different feeling. This can only be used as a book review and appreciation on the one hand!

Author, when I read your article, I couldn't help but think of myself when I was wandering in Guangdong! I am one year younger than you, and my past experiences are too difficult to relate to your article... Now I have entered middle age, and have started a family, and the past events are still vivid in my mind.

If you write stories, be realistic. Just like Once Upon a Time in Northeast China, if you write new media, use new media. It's okay to combine them together. Think realistically. How dare the protagonist fall out with a junior high-ranking cadre when he is a junior? 666 Is too unrealistic. Don't go to the back and just write the invincible article 666