The Cold Wave Hits: From the Start, More Children, More Blessings, and Winning Over a Livestreamer

The system is terrible. A person with a system can't even beat a few ordinary people; they need a gun to deal with just a few. You're the worst doomsday system I've ever seen. And that physique is useless. I was seven years old and had to walk a kilometer to school by myself in minus twenty degrees Celsius. In your opinion, have I been living in a doomsday world all my life?

The ending is too abstract. Without this ending, it would have been a good read. The first half was okay, but there are still some flaws. The female characters weren't surprised by the protagonist's spatial abilities, and the world-building was too small. However, this is understandable since it's only a little over 200,000 words long. But the ending was really hard to believe.

Too much filler, excessive elaboration, and blatant padding. The data is inconsistent; the same statistic changes drastically within just a few sentences. The subject matter is good, the plot structure is decent, but the overall writing is a pile of garbage.

It had a terrible ending. The story was nonsensical; it mentioned going to a new place, but the protagonist died on the way, and then it was over.

Haha! Look at the comments, I don't even want to talk about it anymore. Personal data panel, are you talking about a person?

Abstract

The protagonist, with low intelligence, can eliminate trouble in one step, but it takes many steps. He doesn't take action unless trouble comes knocking, and when trouble does come knocking, he has to slowly argue with them.

A bit unexpected, I didn't get enough, I hope there's a sequel, and there are still a lot of typos.

The system is truly useless.

I wrote something that felt lonely.