When DNF Meets Harry Potter

What is difficult to accept is that the protagonist is written as too low, stupid, childish, vindictive and stingy. Besides copying the plot from the original work, the content I wrote made all the characters look stupid. The sense of fragmentation is very strong. And you already write fantasy fan fiction, can you bring some creativity and imagination to it?

I've watched half of it, and I feel pretty good. It's a different life from the original plot. Isn't this the charm of a fandom? As long as you don't have to copy books, and as long as the second creation setting is not too logical, it will be very engaging. The rest depends on the writing🖊️

It looks good, but I haven't finished it yet. You are also a eunuch.

You have to play some bad jokes. . Moreover, basically everyone who can open this book has read the plot of the original book. Why do you add some God's perspective to the original characters' interactions? It seems that the protagonist is very low

Okay, I followed the plot of Harry Potter and it was very boring (=_=). It's a pity that there are plug-ins.

First is the eunuch What to say then. . . Although it is written as DNF meeting Harry Potter, it is actually a dimension walker. . For others, I only need to lift my mouth once or twice. Then there are many inconsistencies in the plot, which is the plot of the original Hard Fortress😓 Earlier, I told Harry about Snape and that Snape was a double agent. Later, Harry still said that Snape must have done it. Lily was resurrected earlier, but Snape still regarded Sirius as the murderer later. Sirius paid the protagonist money to help him catch Peter, and later he wanted to invade Hogwarts to make things worse. . The protagonist makes a lot of mistakes, but the plot is basically the same as the original. . . I feel that the setting is similar to that of another Pure Dimension Walker (even the plot is somewhat similar) Then I added a bunch of settings that would affect the plot out of thin air, and then the plot didn't change at all😓

After reading more than 50 chapters, why don't you go to heaven? The artifact is worth about a dozen pieces of school uniform. A Potions Master is worth less than Harry's inheritance. When you catch Snape, you will feel like you are just scratching your head and not getting to the root. Love without showing your preciousness.

A eunuch?

It's unfinished, and I stopped updating it after reaching the underwater rescue level of the Triwizard Tournament. The protagonist is very powerful, but in the middle and late stages, he only maintained his wealth and charm design, and did not rely on the krypton gold effect provided by the system. The system felt lonely. The heroine only started appearing in the second year, and to be honest, she was idle most of the time, and her presence was very weak. The author failed to balance the scenes between the male and female protagonists well. Rather than watching the male protagonist show off alone, I would rather the male and female protagonists work together to develop the plot. As for the fact that Hermione was assigned to Harry in the end instead of Ron according to the original work, I don't comment. The second-generation character has its own interpersonal development process. However, there are still too few roles for other passer-by characters. Whether it is the three roommates of the protagonist, Neville, Malfoy, and the Geminis, they all appear occasionally like soy sauce. The author's description of the supporting characters is too thin, and he almost completely relies on the original work to support the characters. In addition, to be honest, the identity of a Ravenclaw student is meaningless because the protagonist basically has no decent interaction with the house. As for Cedric, Cho Chang, Ginny and other important characters who promoted the plot in the original work, there is no such person. Although many times it is the protagonist who dials the needle of fate in advance because he understands the plot, but losing these supporting characters will make the novel seem extremely thin, as if the entire Hogwarts only has the three protagonists, the male and female protagonists, and a few teachers. Even the headmaster of Ravenclaw has barely shown his face, and his frequency of appearances is not as high as that of Professor McGonagall. Think about it, if you, the reader, were Professor Flitwick, and there was such a valuable person in the academy, could you be so calm and not go to him every day to pour experience points into him? In the end, the person who has the closest relationship with the protagonist turns out to be Snape. Is this right?

The creativity is great, the subject matter is novel, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch