My Immortal Cultivation Has a Ten-Pull Pity System

It is recommended that you stop reading after seeing Sheng Yuanying. It is a lot of nonsense. It takes a long time to kill a person, but it takes a long time to beat someone, and it takes a long time to beat someone until he is dead. I've seen about 70% of it, and there are some typos, and I can't even spell out a small paragraph by myself.

It's over, eunuch. The intention is very high, and it also contains many inexplicable thoughts of the author. On the surface, he is cultivating immortals, but in fact, he wants to start his own sect. The golden elixir here is equivalent to the earthly immortal in popular online articles, the Yuanying is equivalent to the true immortal, the transformed god=immortal emperor, and Guixu=ancient gods and demons. The system of "Zhetian" and "Perfect World" is considered a small world here. Do you think the intention of the opening chapter is big? It's a pity that the writing style and imagination cannot evolve such a big world view, just like water without roots.

After reading dozens of chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. It was written incisively and vividly about selfishness, ruthlessness, and unrighteousness. The overall feeling is that everyone is the enemy except myself. What you wrote should be about the animal world, there is no human touch at all.

After seeing Chapter 85, I am not in the mood to continue reading. It is too bland, and it is very bland if it is not pretending to be fake. There is nothing interesting to read in the flowing text. I will give you a so-so bye-bye.

It was okay at first, but after dozens of chapters I couldn't read it anymore. The guarantee of a thousand times fishing and waiting was gone. And the woman's second-level cultivation was so stubborn that she didn't want to shit in this pit. She even said she cherished her life. To put it bluntly, she just gave the protagonist skills. As long as the IQ exceeds 60, the woman will pack up and leave. Anyway, if you have money, isn't it safe to buy a house in Fangshi? If you insist on being the boss in the compound and waiting to die, you are sick. In the end, he actually cooperated with the protagonist to give him skills. The protagonist said that he was trying to survive, but he directly went to kill the sixth floor for this woman's third floor. . .

After reading dozens of chapters, I can't stand it anymore. The setting of levels of strength is too poor. Even if the Qi Refining Stage is one level away, it is described as if there is a huge difference in strength. After reading the comments, there is still the Nascent Soul Stage. Does that mean the battle strength will not collapse? Moreover, the content often repeats what appeared before, which is too wordy and watery.

After reading Chapter 70, my senses are not very good. Here are my personal reading habits: The first is the world view. After reading 70 chapters, I felt that the world is as big as a river reaching the sky, and it is written around the main streams and tributaries. The farthest away is the mountains near the river. The second is the progress of cultivation. This may be due to my personal reasons. I have been in Novice Village for so long, but I have barely reached the level of foundation building. Third, I feel that some of the settings are a bit inconsistent and weird, but I can't put it into words. It may be due to the influence of the world view. The fourth is the sect power, which may be because it was not introduced in the early stage. It feels a bit like the secular world.

Overall, the book is okay. There is no brainless plot in the whole book. The protagonist is systematic and hard-working. However, the plot in the middle and back is a bit bland ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू )

It doesn't matter if the writing is poor, it's just a bunch of bullshit.

"It is useless to add prefixes and suffixes to the one who is truly supreme."