Immortal Road Supreme

The author list is written like this, for example Chapter 1 Battle Chapter 2 The Great War Continues Chapter 3 The war continues Chapter 4 The war ends So interesting~~~Hahaha😄

I have to say that this novel is the first novel of this type that I have read. It's not exactly a conventional family cultivation novel. It's really beautiful, the various logics are very well done, and the writing style is also powerful. I don't want to brag, but I logged in with my mobile phone number just to give this book a good review. It's really good!

First comment: How could there be so many mistakes? There are more than real spirits. I just read a few chapters earlier. The first level is called Qi Entrainment, and the second level is Calling Spirits.

The part about Zhou Tian's world collapsing was so anxious to watch. He knew that the world was collapsing, but he still threw his son and grandson outside. If it weren't for the halo of the protagonist, he would have died several times according to the normal plot. There was also the part about Hu Niu's failure to become an immortal and the layout of Xishan. I felt that as long as the villain had a little brains, he could kill most of the Yang family.

When will you create a fan group?

I have to say that there are a lot of flaws in the article, and many pitfalls have been dug without being completed. When I read more than 1,000 chapters, Yang Junxiu actually broke through the Golden Immortal and almost died. He was also drunk. Didn't you Yang Junshan swear that there will be no problem, haha

It was extremely embarrassing to watch. One moment he was almost as good as the Wu clan, and the other moment he was not as good as him. Especially when he connected with Yan Qinxi and rescued him many times? Your father even severely injured you and almost killed you, but he still breathed a sigh of relief. He saved your life in the previous life, and she wasn't your wife. Why did he save you so many times? ? ?

The introduction is naughty

? ? ? ! ! ! What happened ahead?

The front part is OK, but the back part is a mess. The plate spread is too big to be packed away, and it ends in an anticlimax. I wrote dozens of chapters about the battle between passers-by A, B, C and D, and then the protagonist came out and swept it to an end in three or two chapters. Judging from this length, I almost don't know who the protagonist of this book is. The plot is relatively protracted. In order to make the plot seem ups and downs and tactful, the author will deliberately write some nonsense, and the protagonist's IQ fluctuates. One moment, there are no plans left, and the other moment, the lard is a matter of conscience. And I have to complain about the names of family members. It can be seen that the author wants to create a complete family tree. It was fine in the early days, but later on there were so many children in the family that it was impossible to tell who was who, with a bunch of messy names. What's even more fatal is that the author himself is very confused. He often makes mistakes in writing, which makes the book even more confusing. It is really the biggest failure. Overall, this book is worth reading, and you don't have to have high expectations. The writing is not as good as the real spirit.