Prehistoric: the Fire Leads to Zhunti, I Am Invincible with the Golden Crow

A little comment, 400 Chapters Abandoned Book, this is the only book that I gave up after reading the last part of the book. First of all, I want to talk about the writing style. It was definitely not written by one person. Before the beginning of Fengshen, the writing style was quite weak, equivalent to the kind of articles written by high school students with average grades. But starting from the beginning of Fengshen, the style of painting changed drastically, from high school students to elementary school students. If it were not for my writing skills in the later period, I would probably be able to do it. At the end, of course, the book is still being serialized. I read the content of the last chapter. Duobao is about to enter the West, so it is still a god. Let's talk about the plot development. It's actually not bad. After all, there is not much random fabrication. It is almost the same as the popular prehistoric, so you don't need to use your brain, and then there is logic. Since you don't use your brain, there must be no problem with logic. Pindao believes that the failure lies in changing the author. Fellow Taoists, how do you view this matter?

How come this book is exactly the same as the book "Ancient Fuxi, Nuwa, I Want You to Help Me Practice" except for the different tasks. It really gives people a headache after reading it😩

The Queen Mother of the West is written as the Queen Mother of the East. This AI is invincible. The system is useless. It is better not to write about finding treasures based on strength. And I said that the protagonist has the aura of an emperor and does not want to be the emperor of heaven. Why does the protagonist come here to recruit a few disciples for fun?

After writing about the main character Jin Xiao for hundreds of chapters, what are you going to read?

It was heartbreaking to see

Only the front half can be seen. The first half is okay, but the second half was either written by someone else, or the main character is missing, making it impossible to read anymore. It's irrelevant. Does Fengshenbang require you to translate it into vernacular?

The plot is bland and the writing is average

The sea

I don't think I can change the negative review.

Many typos