Pirate: Thousands of Hands, Killing Indiscriminately!

Don't read it. It's really disgusting. The pirates of the new era will become the opposite of Rocks' remnants. Do you want to read what you are writing? I saw the last few pictures of the timeline and I didn't even understand it. And for the needs of the plot, the strength of some characters was infinitely increased in the early stage. Whitebeard will be captured alive by the pirates and Garp, and a pirate alliance can be formed. And Cyborg Kong is not that strong. Whitebeard, you can give people the fifth place. In the end, Crocodile can appear. Participate in the battle to encircle and suppress Whitebeard. You think highly of him, right?

To be honest, I just finished reading it. The whole book is very well written and it is indeed a One Piece fanfic worth reading. However, I personally think that the character of Lena was a failure during her three years in the Pirate Alliance. I think it is completely unnecessary.

The writing is very boring, and there is no desire to continue reading. Many chapters are skipped directly without wanting to read.

It's annoying, why do you have to add a woman who has nothing to do with the plot?

A different One Piece fanfic, very exciting

It's okay, very average, but too boring, too much nonsense, and not interesting.

It's all nonsense, it's all about boring things, nothing exciting, it keeps talking about big principles

What are you writing about? Why are you talking so much nonsense? It's a pleasure to watch. What's the use of writing so many words? Just chatting.

It's so boring, the plot is mediocre and not exciting at all