I Am Xiao Feng in Dou Po

It's nonsense, the protagonist doesn't have a starting point, Xiao Feng is a waste! He is a million miles away from the protagonist in "I am the Ancestor of the Xiao Family", and no one is even smarter! Again, the protagonist of this book, Xiao Feng, is a loser.

How can I put it? There are so many things to complain about. 1. First of all, the writing technique is described as being as detailed as a textbook if it sounds good, and it is long-winded if it sounds bad. Although it is fine to say that it is detailed, the full text has more than 600 chapters, and the actual innovative plot should not exceed 300 chapters. The description of the psychological journey is only half of the plot of the original work. 2. The plot in the early stage is not bad, but starting from the time when the protagonist goes out to look for opportunities, we can almost abandon the book. Let's talk about the plot line first. Too many plots are almost copied from the original work. There is nothing new. Then there is the emotional line. If you can't write it, you don't need to write the heroine. The consequences of such forced writing will be embarrassing, okay? 3. When taking "juniors" (or suspected harem group preliminary members to be more accurate, although in the end it was not written into the harem story for some unknown reason), when I went out to look for opportunities, I would always neglect here, not pay attention there, and then constantly apologize and comfort a strong person in a high position. This is really cheap. I will hit hard when I treat men. Every mistake I make when I treat women will only be my fault. It's like a dog licker, right? 4. I know that the male protagonist has been single all his life, but the description after seeing a beautiful woman is really hard to describe. He behaves like a lewd thief, and ends up starving to death. Even if they end up together, it would be okay. The result is to write about mutual embarrassment, mutual shyness, and then nothing more. So are these plots written just to fill the word count? It is very speechless. 5. So many ancient secrets are written in the article just to prove that one cannot break through Dou Di without Origin Qi? ? ? This is what makes me most speechless. There is such a good plot that can be enriched and broken out of the inherent ending framework of Dou Po. But this is the result? It's better to destroy the soul clan early, then break through the Dou Emperor, break the void to draw the source energy, and then integrate the power to fight against the evil races outside the enemy's territory (almost like docking with the content of the Great Overlord), and then work hard to raise the Dou Po Plane to a higher latitude. Doesn't this kind of content sound good to him? Is this the result? That's it? That's it? ! Very speechless

Why does the protagonist become a fool after meeting several women? Isn't the protagonist over a thousand years old? Why does the protagonist keep staring at others like a fool who has never seen a woman before (my personal opinion)

In the Netherworld Python Clan. Rescue Yaoming. I played 20 cards against two people with one star and holy water, but Yaoming was still in the late stage of two-star holy water. I also ate an eighth-grade three-color elixir. Recover your strength. Don't tell me that you haven't recovered your strength. Talked a lot

The timeline is messed up, the protagonist loses his wits, the writing is not top-notch (not much to say), the combat power is 100 million points broken, and after reading more than 100 chapters, this is my personal experience, you can still read it, because I am a fan of the original work, so I feel uncomfortable watching it, so I would like to remind everyone. Don't join the original party

To be honest, after watching the previous ones, it was good at first, but when the plot line started, it really changed. I feel like I can watch you cheating on the third brother next door, but I really can't watch you cheating on my little Yanzi. It is indeed the worst novel I have ever read and the Dou Po series I have read so far.

How to say it? This book has more than 600 chapters. He may not have created more than 300 of his own innovations. Many of them are narrating the original text of Fighting to Break the Sky. Nothing of my own. Just because you know the plot doesn't mean, hey, you just bring out the plot and speculate on it every once in a while. The kind that looks uncomfortable.

Seize the chance of pig's trotters, copy the plot of pig's trotters and call pig's trotters shameless. To be honest, it's a question of character, can't everyone write their own lines?

Everyone is written as having an IQ defect

The plot in the later stage was too watery. When he saw Medusa, he praised her and even showed off that he could do it for several pictures. Yun Yun's part was even more watery and a little more hypocritical. He was obviously a sex demon. It felt like the protagonist wanted to have sex with a beautiful woman when he saw one. Sometimes he was hesitant. It was disgusting.