Signing In for a Hundred Years in Shrouding the Heavens to Become a Saint

This protagonist makes people more and more annoying and embarrassing. He always talks about the righteousness of the human race and makes himself look like a real "saint". He seems very hypocritical. If you want the human race to become stronger, you should work hard to cultivate and become an emperor as soon as possible.

No, the author was really too anxious to write. He wrote the fairy king as if it were cabbage, which is too cheap. This is still the era of Zhetian. In the era of the perfect world, there are so many fairy kings in the fairyland and they are not so profitable. What is the same as what you wrote? Can't watch

Nice

Something always feels wrong

Too much nonsense, even a system is useless. The protagonist has no trump cards. The writing is really not that good.

The system is completely ineffective, so I mentioned it at the beginning. There is no sense of immersion at all. It's like reading a running account diary. Is it written in the third person?

Has the author read the Perfect World novel? He is already an Immortal Emperor when he reaches the top of the sky. Also, I remember that there are no Immortals in the Immortal World.

Running account

There are relatively few self-contained fanfics that are relatively innovative. Many fanfics either lick the protagonist's group and then accompany the protagonist's development, or they seize the opportunity for the protagonist to develop in advance and then go back to help the protagonist develop. The protagonist of this book is a bystander who develops his own lineage and becomes a protagonist from time to time. Intersection, to be honest, this idea is okay, but the character of the protagonist in the author's works is very unpleasant. Many places of opportunity are subject to the three-light policy, and all good things are wiped out when they see them. There are also various exchanges at the beginning under the banner of righteousness, which makes people don't know what to say. The story design in the fairyland is okay, but the narration is relatively average.

The plot is okay at the beginning, but a little confusing at the end. The whole story has a good context, but the language is too plain.