Building Wealth Through Hard Work in Sunagakure

The beginning is okay, but in the middle, Konoha and Suigakure are just writing dozens of chapters without seeing the protagonist. One or two chapters are either about Zuo Ai or the protagonist is leaving, and then there is another long paragraph written here and there. The plot progress is slow, the protagonist has no improvement at all, the starting setting is very invincible, I can already play six games per second, but I am still struggling, how to do business, there are many repeated sentences and some chapters are confusing, I bought it with 8.6 Points

The first hundred or so chapters were okay, but not the later ones. Because Sunagakure was too strong, he forced other villages to be lifted up, and the third generation was also forced to lift up. To say that the third generation must have been very capable and insidious to live for so long, is there a possibility that the other villages are also rubbish, so the third generation is slightly better. To put it bluntly, this kind of invincible style If you don't change the map in fan fiction, a novel will have to end after 200 chapters, because Naruto is only so big and has only so many bosses. Other novels also go from city to province, then to the whole country, and then the whole world. A few old coins can pop up in the middle, and in the final finale, there are aliens, and then the sea of stars. Everyone in Naruto knows who the boss is and who the old coin is, and there isn't much room for development, so many fan novels will be integrated with other anime, so that they can write more. To put it simply, this novel deliberately suppresses the protagonist's village, and then the protagonist just wants to retire, and he can be confused for a while in the middle, which is awesome.

The front is indeed OK, but the back is hard to say. I would like to ask what the protagonist is doing after traveling through time? Make Sunagakure Village strong, but other villages have also reformed and you are still at the bottom. And many characters are too outrageous. You say getting married is right, and then you do it in the blink of an eye.

There is no main line and it is a bit confusing. I opened the audio book and did something else and then it was over.

The combat power collapsed in the first three chapters of the game. Others use ninjutsu and the protagonist uses magic (the energy of heaven and earth is equivalent to sage ninjutsu) to even the ninja world genius? Besides, the protagonist also has a lottery system

I have read a lot of Naruto books. This one is about third-rate subordinates. Ninjas are civilianized. The direction of professionalization is right, but shouldn't they start with their own people? On the surface, they agree to the famous merchants and nobles to learn ninjutsu, which is equivalent to recognizing their status. If they learn it, they have learned it. They will not allow ninjutsu to be civilianized. Refining chakra seems to depend on qualifications. This is not reflected in this novel at all. It also creates a gap between the ninjas in the village, but the author takes it for granted and cannot express it in writing.

The protagonist's character collapses

If you are so awesome, you can slowly develop the village. Why do you want to tell the breakthrough method later? This will further expand the level of the war and make other villages think that they have the power to challenge you. I don't understand why.