Douluo's Contract Talisman

Although you work hard on writing, you just don't like licking. You have such a good advantage. You know the eyes of ice and fire and you still become a disciple. The key is to be wet. I am also drunk and I don't feel anything at all.

Doesn't the author also read what he writes? Is the logic sound? When he came up, he said that he was an outsider and was hated by the Shura God. He could only believe in becoming a god in the future. It was best to take over the Spirit Hall. Then he turned around and ran to Yu Xiaogang to become his disciple. See for yourself, isn't there a contradiction? You and Tang San were naturally at odds with each other, so you licked the master and led the rabbit. Don't you think Tang Hao can't kill soul beasts? Besides, your martial soul doesn't need to kill soul beasts to get the soul ring. It's useless to become a disciple. It can be said that Yu Xiaogang plagiarized knowledge is useless to you. He just licked it up and deliberately smeared Bibi Dong to destroy the continent. It's nonsense. Bibi Dong just wanted to destroy Qianjia and destroy the Wuhun Palace. She established It can be said that the Wuhun Empire has destroyed the Wuhun Palace, and Qian Renxue is the only one left in the Qian Family to take revenge. Even the evil soul masters have to be supported by ordinary people, so no one will destroy the continent and destroy everything. The protagonist who wants to believe in becoming a god can join the Wuhun Palace as soon as possible, whether it is to become a disciple of Bibi Dong or to join forces with Qian Renxue. The apprenticeship of the master is purely disgusting to the reader.

Another eunuch

The writing is not good, the setting is not well structured, and 80% of people who watch Douluo fandom only watch the torture of San Gang

When you see the protagonist running to become a master, you know that the book is written to death! Even the master's own theory is untenable, and the protagonist, as a time traveler, knows it and goes to become his master! Nothing new! It's better to just read the original work!

I don't understand the comment section when I saw Tang San worshiping Yu Xiaogang as his disciple and scolding him. I feel that if I don't side with Wuhun Palace, I will be angry and angry. For me, as long as I don't write nonsense, I can follow anyone. The author's writing is good enough. At least this is the book that I want to follow after reading so many fans. It's a pity that the eunuch can't finish writing the Ice and Fire Dragon King before ending it (ノへ￣,)

This book has nothing to read since the protagonist awakens his martial soul and chooses to become a disciple of Yu Xiaogang. Without Xiao Wu, the author's reasons can barely pass. However, the protagonist comes into contact with Xiao Wu more than two years in advance. If he goes to Yu Xiaogang, it is destined to bring Xiao Wu's 100,000-year soul ring to his door. Tang Hao is not a good person, and if he doesn't want Xiao Wu to be killed, he probably has to curry favor with Tang San.

I have my own ideas, but I haven't finished writing them yet, so I stopped updating them.

Not finished

I became a disciple of Yu Xiaogang, not much to see, Yu Xiaogang knows nothing