Konoha's Opening Sign and Reincarnation Eye

Did Uchiha Shisui die in that battle? How could Kakashi die while searching for Lin? Is this the butterfly effect? Have you never read the original novel? Obito can't see the protagonist's reincarnation eye. If he can't see it, why should he wear sunglasses?

The protagonist says that it doesn't matter, that doesn't matter. He is still gathering strength everywhere. What is he writing? The protagonist has no character. Those signed ninjutsu are not used in some major wars and conflicts. Should they be used on Hong? There is also Brother Hong's love. Watch a movie with hundreds of chapters. How do you fall in love?

What's the rating at 8 o'clock? How on earth did this come about? It's written like shit. Those who don't deserve to die should die. Later on, I travel to One Piece and write about Naruto. Just write about Naruto. You can just put it in One Piece and put it in the next book. It's either torturing this or that. It's not interesting at all.

Purely, it's a big lump and I can't stand it at all.

Not so good

Not ordinary bad

Nice

Naruto is terrible in the early stage, but in the later stage, he and the Pirate Death can be seen.

I can understand if you write about a world like Naruto/Pirates/Conan/Death that doesn't go out of the universe/doesn't know there are other planets in the universe, but you write about Saiyans? ? ? The Saiyans are so powerful that they can fly in other weeks, and even more powerfully, they can travel through other universes! ! ! The key is time travel/Kaiou/Kaioshin and so on!

This book is okay, but the ending is a bit too fast. I wish I could continue writing the Dragon Ball chapter.