After Signing for Ten Years, the Handyman Became an Invincible Swordsman

Elementary school student writing? No passion, long-winded, pretentious

You have to punch one after another to fight the golden elixir. How skilled are you at crossing the tribulation? How can you fight so hard?

This protagonist is saving people every day, either saving people or on the way to save people. I really don't understand what the author is thinking.

The good points: no mess, no procrastination, progress is very fast! The breakthrough is very strong! The bad: The story line is like a running account. The disciples and the sect leader are constantly in danger, and the protagonist always comes to the rescue at critical moments and then counterattacks. Filled throughout the book.

It's so embarrassing to write 😓

Something is always coming to the rescue when something happens to the sect. There is nothing new at all. The ratings are real and fake.

I'm writing about my daily life. I feel like I'm reading a journal. I'm speechless and speechless.

Oh, this one is not worthy of 8

It always takes a long time for the protagonist to show up. .

If you open so many courses, why don't you care about the degree later? Only practice 108 points