The Cat on the Pirate Ship Whitebeard

It looks good and I like it. The overall quality of this novel is quite good, and the details in the middle are also well described. I think the author has a lot of research on pirates. I have read at least thirty or forty pirate fan novels, and this novel ranks among the top ones for me. (I have a little question⊙ω⊙, how is the Five Old Stars resurrected? How does it work specifically? Can someone come out and answer it for me? If the author can complete this point, then in my opinion this novel will be close to perfect. I have no shortcomings and no other questions) (I want to emphasize that I am not a sailor, these are my personal opinions)

Although the plot is not too outstanding, it can be regarded as an above-average pirate fanfic just because it has no flaws. Of course, the author suffered the disadvantage of writing the book too early (in fact, it was not very early). The differences with the original work include the use of Bawang color and the five old stars.

I personally recommend it. Many plots are in line with my feelings. 1. I really like this kind of systematic, but not completely systematic personal drama of the protagonist. 2. Some plots have been changed very well. For minor spoilers, it's great that Whitebeard is alive. Blackbeard should disappear like a bug (praise) [No heroine] Although she looks like a human in many cases, she is still a cat after all. You really don't want to have any strange developments, don't say anything about this kind of thing! I can personally score 9.5, Which is a very good second hit.

It's quite good overall, there aren't too many complaints, and the plot is relatively clear. I think it's a relatively good read among novels like One Piece!

First of all, let me get out of the way: I have never watched One Piece, I have only heard of it and have a little understanding of it. Secondly, when I read this book, I felt it was very smooth and silky. There are some small spoilers at the end, which impressed me deeply. Around the middle of the game, the protagonist drew a clone while spinning the wheel. He drew Luo Xiaohei. He used Luo Xiaohei's ability panel, but his consciousness was still the protagonist's. From the time he got this clone, he got it all the way to the end.

Well, yes, it is a book that is rare to read in its entirety. There is relatively little plot with Bai Tuan, but after all, those who engage in GM must be relatively close to the GM army, and they do not have much to do with their father who is a pirate. The final ending is a little sloppy, but after all, Pirates has not finished serializing, so it's excusable. Overall a very good book, worth reading

The plot is interesting, and it can be seen that the author has researched One Piece, but the research is too superficial. The Sengoku General from the Warring States Period was originally translated incorrectly, so I kept using it and thought I knew One Piece very well. Then there is the timeline that the Shichibukai was established after the Warring States Period when he became the marshal. Luo ate the fruit from the surgery when he was about 10 years old. Luo was only one year older than Reijiu. In the early timeline, Reijiu was only 1 year old. How did Luo eat the fruit? All in all, the author has done some research on pirates, but he is too casual. It feels like a pirate-savvy guy is writing a novel.

The author is very bold and gives you a different feeling when reading it. But the writing is somewhat lacking in feeling.

The writing is good, the system's presence is not high, and the ending can bring the entire Whitebeard Pirates to another world. I should be writing a second part. What kind of story can the Whitebeard Pirates break out in another world?

To be honest, most people come here for cats. If you get a Winged Man fruit, it feels nondescript. If you get a mind or voice-related one, it's almost the same.