I Found an Immortal Island

It was okay at the beginning, but after a few dozen chapters it became wild and messy. Personally, I thought it was just average.

The subject matter is okay, the plot is also good, but the writing is not very good, which is a pity

The author knows very little about the unpredictable nature of the human heart! The main plot and branch plots are blurred. Does the protagonist want to live forever in immortality or become a king in the mortal world? This novel can only be regarded as a joke. It is childish and boring. Bad review.

It's okay, I can watch it, I'll write a sequel

I can't stand it anymore when I see the city management.

There are so many grasslands above my head, and I don't know what the ending is.

The plot is confusing, the writing is poor, and it's verbose.

Generally

Is it true that everyone who writes novels has the nature of being a dog-licker?

Not interesting