Dragon Ball: The Twin Brother

They say Master Roshi and his friends don't know what ki is, then what do they use to unleash the Kamehameha? If a Saiyan cuts off their tail, will they still turn into a Great Ape? And is the interaction between the author and the characters really that interesting? To save his fiancée, he was short one Dragon Ball, so why didn't he talk to Bulma properly? Did she owe him something?

Overall, it's alright.

Too many typos, too many modal particles, too much nonsense, I'm outta here.

Does the fact that they've time-traveled mean Goku can't marry Suno? He stole Bulma, and Suno was at least Goku's savior, and a gentle one at that. Look at the life Goku's living! If he married a gentle girl, he could teach her what she didn't know. But Chi-Chi? She's so self-centered, and she's been manipulating Gohan since she was little, practically turning him into a fool before she was four.

Hesitant and indecisive, later becomes extremely toxic.

I still don't understand what the author is rambling on about. That same black-haired guy appears so many times in every chapter, it's really annoying.

It's really mediocre for Dragon Ball fans; the concept is strange.

Well, the first 30 chapters were alright, but the rest were just filler. The protagonist had too much internal monologue, and he was a saintly figure trying to act all high and mighty. Speechless.

The author's writing style is too historical.

Poisonous