Dragon Ball Twins

He said Kame Sennin and the others don't know what ki is, so what does Kame style ki power use? Will a Saiyan turn into a gorilla if his tail is cut off? Is it interesting for the author to interact with the characters? In order to save his fiancée, he collected one dragon ball and was short of talking to Bulma. Do they owe you anything? Then he ran to Namek alone. Look, if his fiancée is really cold and no one helps to save her, how can she be resurrected? Wouldn't she be cold every time? You wrote this setting yourself, don't you know? You keep watching it, and there is an accident when you go to Namek, and you crash land on another planet, and then everyone on other planets are like Naocan. I can't stand it!

Overall it's okay

Too many typos, too many modal particles, too much nonsense, it just slipped away

Wouldn't it be possible for Wukong to marry Suno if he has already traveled through time? After snatching Bulma, Suno is Sun Wukong's savior after all, and he is also a gentle type. Look at what kind of life Sun Wukong lives? Marry a gentle person. Wukong can still teach him what he doesn't understand. What about Qiqi? Everything is self-centered. I was deceived into a fool from childhood until I was four years old.

Grinding, chirping, squirming, highly toxic in the later stages

I still don't understand what the author is trying to do. A certain black hair appears several times in each chapter, which is really annoying to watch.

For Dragon Ball fans, it's really ordinary and the setting is strange.

How can I put it this way, the first 30 chapters are okay, but the rest are full of words, the protagonist has too much inner drama, and the Holy Mother is still pretending to be bad. Speechless

The author's writing style is so historical

Poisonous as hell