Asking About Immortality Starting from Mortals

As soon as I got to Jindan, I couldn't even see a woman. If you are a woman, you have to do something simple and you can't stand it anymore. Before Jindan, it was fine, but after Jindan, you really have nothing to say. You join this one, you join that one, and you have sex with women again.

Did I come to see you play with women? There are all kinds of excuses and reasons why you can't walk when you see a woman. Is it so easy for you to get the male protagonist's woman? Will Heaven watch you and grab it casually?

The character of the protagonist is not likeable. He is really the kind of person who is unscrupulous. As long as there is a benefit, he will not remind others even if the clan is exterminated. He will steal all the treasures for others because he thinks that the clan is about to be exterminated anyway. If I take the treasure, it will not be an advantage to others. We can't be so shameless as humans. Whether it is a factional dispute or someone else's entrustment, since someone has given you a benefit, at least do something. I don't need you to step in to turn the tide. At least I have some conscience. Let me remind you that it doesn't matter if people don't believe you or run away.

All cats and dogs come to write novels

It is difficult to write a good time-travel story about mortals cultivating immortality. Han Laomo is top-notch in terms of his three views, character, will, IQ, and utilization of resources. If you write against such a person, the readers will be disgusted. If you write about hugging his thigh, it becomes like a dog-licking. When you write about grabbing his resources, the plot will be difficult to integrate and develop. Every opportunity he has is very relevant. The little green bottle is just a small thing, but he uses it to the extreme. It's hard to compare with the characters who traveled through the past. In terms of outlook, character, and IQ, if you can't compare to him, then what's the point?

Yes, the whole book is almost a mental activity. It was very painful to read and made me suffer.

The ending is average

Rated up to 2.5

It was okay before, but after meeting Han Li in Destruction, it was a little bit like, it doesn't matter what you do as long as you have a system.

It's such a mess, it's simply a cool article!