Versatile Mage: Lord of Space

It's pretty good in the Versatile Mage fanfic, but the details are not enough, and the strength gap between the protagonist and Mo Fan is too big. When reading this kind of fanfic, I feel that I still have to respect the original protagonist Mo Fan. After all, many people read the novel Versatile Mage because of its reputation, but the gap is too big. If there are two protagonists, and the plot details are enough, and the strength gap is not too big, then this fanfic may be better.

I think this book is okay, and it's not the kind of thing where you just meet a woman. The plot, the key is that in many of these fanfics, the woman who is the protagonist is the heroine. I read those fanfics and felt very uncomfortable. Murong Jiao and Ashariya in this book are all okay, and they are all very good, but they insist on grabbing the heroine. I really don't understand why they insist on writing it like this. I read a lot of them just to grab the heroine, so I stopped reading it.

The writing is obviously a noob, with many typos and wrong sentences. (In terms of sentences, I would like to add something that I can't bear to give a bad review. Is it that you can't even break sentences? Have you been to high school? Even if you don't know how to use punctuation, you don't know what a long or short sentence is, right? There is no punctuation in a long paragraph, and the dialogue between characters is still finished in one breath, a little There is no pause in tone, why? These characters are all robots? This problem is very serious, and it greatly affects the reading experience.) Then there is the narrative, many settings are not explained clearly, and the descriptions of the moves are not written. The readers just follow the original ideas, so the fighting is not written at all. The opportunities are also from the original work. In addition to the original talent, the plot and other aspects are all the protagonist's journey through the original work. As cheats, prophets and gifted monsters are indeed much better than the system, but the protagonist will not be able to use them even if they are given cheats. As for Bo City, when you reach the mid-level, you can go to other places to develop, further strengthen yourself with better resources, and then come back a few days before the disaster in Bo City. But the protagonist has been practicing for so long, and the Black Church, the villain is still forcibly subduing him. Knowing that there is a talented monster like the protagonist in Bo City, Shou Mingwen Girls' High School didn't know how to add a few more powerful mages during the disaster. Suggested audience: Don't read if you are concerned about the text, as it may lead to high blood pressure. The original party food was tasteless. Passers-by, if you haven't read the original work, please don't click in. Summary: It's a short story, and will be updated in the future. There is a lot of room for improvement. The protagonist completely follows the course of the original work, and will not write about personal experiences or other plots. The fighting is bad, the emotional line... Just pretend it doesn't exist.

The pace of the rest of the story is too fast, almost to the point of being unfinished.

The food is mediocre, the description of the characters and plot is mediocre, the training is almost one sentence, there is no main line, the words are a bit nonsense, the space skill looks high-end and has low practicality, no matter what level it is, it will always be exhausted after a few uses. The fighting is turn-based, and you have to win without mana every time. Everything is written, and everything is mediocre. The plot, characters, training, and settings are all related, but none of them stand out, and have no characteristics (눈_눈)

After the Battle of the Academy, the story is over. There is nothing new in the plot. It basically follows the original plot. The opportunities are basically the same as those in the original plot.

So far, it's okay. The disadvantage is that the author doesn't know how to write about fighting, so it's basically a skip or round-crushing type of fighting. It's normal to invest in geniuses, but Mo Fan is a genius enough, and he has a lot of admirers, but Mo Fan basically relies on himself. The help of others to Mo Fan cannot be said to be dispensable. It can only be said that Mo Fan cannot lack their help, but their help is not the foundation of Mo Fan's success.

Let me put it this way, when I had no money in the early stage, I could collect the essence and residual soul, but I still lost tens of millions because of Mo Fan. I saw about 30 of them, basically babysitters. Moreover, the protagonist didn't have any brains at all, so he directly told Tang Yue about the rain situation. It was normal for the higher-ups not to believe it. Then the protagonist said there alone that after he became a super-level, he would pull down all those rotten people. It can only be said that I have no brains at all.

Why don't you update it? It's good.

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