Siheyuan: Playing the Fool to Catch the Tiger

A deputy director troubles the protagonist every day because of several kilograms of grain items. Isn't it better for the protagonist to be a chef? Or to be an official? Is he completely a political novice? Plus, those who time travel know the plot behind it. Being an official is not as good as being a good cook. The writing is inconsistent.

Overall, it's okay, and the idea is clever. When writing this kind of novel, you should avoid adding personal opinions. Just write it well. Not everyone has the same opinion, and it may feel verbose and affect the reading experience.

I can't read Chapter 4 and already want to give up the book. Isn't that to discriminate against those authors? If you haven't lived under the roots of the Imperial City for three generations, it's best not to write about the 49th City. You don't know the dialect and spoken language, and you don't understand all the old etiquette and rules, so why are you writing about chicken feathers? Three days is enough, and two days is enough to ask for help. Who will be doing the work that day? I didn't find a cook the night before.

In the beginning, I often spent tens of thousands to buy things, but it was a bit uncomfortable to spend millions. The plot in the middle is pretty good and there isn't much to complain about.

Not recommended

It feels like it is written by AI, borrowing money is hundreds of thousands, and writing a gift of 1,000 is the lowest. Many so-called moral kidnappings and anti-kidnappings are written like children playing house. I can't help but rub it in my face at all.

One, two, three is too many

I'm rambling here and there, and the plot is written over and over again, so I have a bad memory.