
The Perfect Start Removed the Brother's Supreme Bone
完美之开局取下了弟弟的至尊骨
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.7M Words
- Genre
- Anime & ACG
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qimao
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802Chapters
708kPopularity
1kReaders
2.4kMust-read votes
9.2Score
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The Huangtian Emperor is much older than the Henren Emperor. I don't know how many great emperors and emperors there are between them. This book is written in the ancient times of the Huangtian Emperor, so it is impossible for the Henren Emperor to exist, not even in the long run of time. What's even more ridiculous is that the disciples of the Henren Emperor are actually in the same era as the Huangtian Emperor. It's really a mess.
Compared with the original work, this fanfic made me feel a different kind of fun. Whether it was Shi Yi beating his brother early or Shi Yi changing the fate of most people in Zhetian Universe, I felt a different kind of fun. After all, it's fan fiction, so it's okay to have changes and new things, so there's no need to ask for too much.
The failure was that the Great Heavenly Master teleported the two of them to the Spirit Emperor! I really don't understand why I write this! Anyway, I gave up at this point! What a pity, what a pity! It's hard to understand why a venerable warrior would be so wasteful running away from the enemy's camp! They are all immortals of hundreds of thousands of years being played by you! ! ! Do you really think that the enemy will not be the scapegoat? Never mind your strong background! The Immortal King transforms! Arrange the Three-Five Immortals to transform them! Immortal arranges great forces! ! If I were immortal, the protagonist would not be able to survive the next chapter in front of me.
The plot is very bland and boring. It made Shi Hao look like a fool, and also wrote off Shi Hao's invincibility. It's obviously a fanfic of Perfect World. If you click on it and read it, except that the character names are the same, the plot is completely different from the original work. Neither Yuechan nor the Witch appeared in the early stage. When did the double-eyed girl become so familiar with Liu Shen? When the protagonist encounters an enemy, he just crushes them without any brainless pretense. The combat power collapsed directly. The protagonist relies on the halo of the protagonist to push him all the way. It is a completely brainless and cool novel. The author who wrote this book definitely did not finish reading the original book Perfect World. Just follow the trend at will.
Why didn't I see Yun Xi? Who is Yun Qian?
It feels very good. It is in line with the temperament of the original work to a large extent. Although it is not as good as Hong Maodong's writing style, it is much better than the brainless novels I have read. It is just that the part about being forced to marry by the Spirit Emperor is a bit difficult to break.
Being strengthened by the alien double pupil
After watching it for so long, I don't even know if there is a female protagonist.
There are many things that have not been written. The protagonist is already in the Heavenly Realm, why not go to the Virtual God Realm?
In order to make up the word count, I wrote a lot of nonsense, which was a bit boring to listen to.