Douluo Dalu: More Children, More Blessings, Starting with Qian Renxue

The writing is poor, the nonsense is endless, the plot is bland, and there is no passion at all. If you want to drive, just write it well. Why are you talking about the Porsche in your previous life? If you don't know how to write this kind of plot, just write something else. Also, in your eyes, women are just tools, and children are accidents. What are your three views? Are you just sowing seeds and not raising them? Can't you write your plot well? You have to mention some of the original content. After a lot of mentioning, let's get back to the point. After reading it for a long time, it turned out to be a bunch of nonsense. There are many problems in the connection between the plot and the plot. The previous plot ended suddenly, which seemed inexplicable. There are also big problems with the protagonist's character image Don't say that your data is not good. It's strange that your data is good because you have so many problems.

What is the topic. System of many children and many blessings. What are you writing about? Ancient secret heart? The return of the ancient race? You An Zhaodou snatched all the famous women to have children in one plot. Isn't this the system you want to have many children and many blessings?

At the beginning, the first few dozen pictures were quite interesting. They were all plots of fighting for one, and they had something to do with the system of many children and many blessings, as well as some strategies and calculations. In the middle period, it wasn't that good, it was more average, and there was a bit of fighting 2 stuff. The system was not available in 800 lifetimes, and the plot was not good to watch. The fights were either ephemeral, or just written randomly, and then there were a lot of psychological descriptions, and some ancient sects appeared. Then the later period was really unsightly and too confusing, especially when there were only the last 30 chapters left. There was a lot of fighting stuff, and then explaining it, and then explaining it, and then writing psychological descriptions. It was really nonsense. There is no plot or fighting all the time. Originally, the last few chapters were well written, but in the last two or three chapters, so many ancient soul masters and ancient ferocious beasts suddenly appeared. At that time, Tang San didn't even start the Poseidon test, and the protagonist was only a level 95 titled Douluo. However, the last two chapters were completely unfinished. A few months later, and then half a year later, it was said that Tang San had become Poseidon. It didn't say what level the protagonist was. It didn't say anything about the God Realm. It didn't say whether those ancient things existed or not. It didn't say anything. It just ended.

Let's put it this way, four-fifths of a chapter is filled with detailed descriptions and psychological descriptions, which is typical of over-description. Even the remaining one-fifth of the chapter contains dialogue, and one-fifth of the chapter contains some plot points. Think about it, how watery it is. By the way, this author is not simple, and he repeatedly emphasizes water grammar. This water grammar It probably means using various angles to demonstrate and repeatedly emphasize the correctness of one's point of view. The strength of this hydrological method is that, for example, a chapter has 2,400 words, of which 2,020 are repeated from various angles, and only the remaining 200 words are the content. Deleting 2,100 words from these 2,200 words does not affect the content but makes it smoother. Doesn't it feel scary?

The thief is evil and has a plan. The timeline is a bit late and the game is already halfway through. He disguised himself as Tang San and slept with Dugu Yan, used Tang San to intimidate Xiao Wu and A Yin, and used Tang Hao to intimidate Tang Yuehua. Except for what Qian Renxue traded, the others were all coercion and inducement. It was good that there was not so much love and affection. Ning Rongrong, one of the three beauties, stopped accepting girls with no reputation. Queen Xingluo, Tang Yuanyuan, Meng Yiran, Dean Tianshui, and the fifth daughter of Tianshui.

This writing is too messy. I have tested the poison and it is very toxic.

A stallion-born protagonist novel

The plot is too confusing

Very pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The writing is really ugly