Siheyuan: After Intercepting Hu Qin Huairu, I Laughed and Tortured All the Birds

The early writing is really good, with some conflicts and some fun. But when I wrote about 200 chapters, I started to analyze the film and television drama. I wrote the various little thoughts about the relationship between some NPC characters in the TV drama vividly. I told you from beginning to end why this drama is called (Qinman Siheyuan)! ! ! The protagonist has no role at all except being a camera, and there is nothing to fill in. After the protagonist met the big boss, the big boss said that the protagonist's face was familiar, and then nothing happened. The supporting actor said a few words about the protagonist's unusual identity, and there was no follow-up. . .

Writing about Jie Hu, the result is like a eunuch without male functions, all kinds of pretense, all kinds of hypocrisy. After writing her heartfelt message, she also reluctantly wrote about Qin Huairu falling in love with the male protagonist. Don't you feel embarrassed? In reality, which girl would like a coward? You can slowly become your warm man (dog licker) + loser money + Ninja Turtles!

I've only read a dozen chapters, so let's talk about my feelings. Jia Dongxu got married in 1951, and the steward only got married at the end of 1952, so the time is confusing. It is impossible for Sun He and Qin Huairu from the meat joint factory to get married after seeing each other on a blind date, because marriage requires Jian Shaoxin, so the logic does not make sense. Jia Dongxu's setting fire to the house was considered an attempt, and the combined penalty for both the crime of stealing and the attempt was only three years. This point is quite poisonous. Also, the third uncle's name is Yan Bugui, not Yan Bugui...

The writing is okay, the plot is bland, too grindy and watery. Some characters, such as Mr. Jia Zhang's characterization, are extremely failed, just like a psycho. There are many places that are self-contradictory, and some places are seriously inconsistent with the era. It is very awkward and embarrassing.

Not bad. The ups and downs are not too big. But it can be considered a fine product.

It's hard to describe in one sentence, but the writing is okay, even if it's full of loopholes. It's more difficult later on, it's basically the same plot as Yuan

The front is barely readable, but the magic modification at the back is not interesting at all.

I have read 100 chapters so far. The story is a good one, but there are too many typos. I don't even want to give examples. Without listening to the book, I can guess the words that the author wants to type. I will continue reading for now. I hope you can read it later. This book is on Maotai, one of the novels that can be read in Siheyuan Tongwen. Don't mind there are so many typos. .

Everything was fine up front, but suddenly an exchange building appears and you are confused! This was done in the early days of the founding of the People's Republic of China. Is this author a serious author? Can't you write it well? Even if you have a system, doing this in 49 cities will make you impatient!

What kind of LJ plot does it seem to have nothing to do with the protagonist?