Douluo Simulation: Get a Semi-Artifact at the Beginning

The content is okay, but the author does not have a thorough understanding of the setting of Douluo Continent itself. For example, in the seventh soul ring of one hundred thousand years, even Tang San has two soul skills, but the author said that the seventh soul ring given by Qian Renxue broke the restriction. There is no such restriction at all, it just means that there must be one skill that is the martial spirit true form.

I saw a bad review that said there were no characters, so I agreed to it just to add to the plot. To be honest, some plots are just to make up the word count. If you want to write imaginative stories, you can, but there is no need to waste time. The protagonist is like the yy of a naughty person in real life, very beautiful but also scummy. She was the ultimate girl, and she pretended to be kind and righteous, but it turned out that because she didn't sense any malice, she was actually heartless and ungrateful. She had no rules and means, and no starting point. She was just a plot tool. Maybe she wanted to write the protagonist as calm and pretentious, but after hundreds of chapters, the plot was bland and watery. The game was about not offending anyone but caring about everyone. The balance lies in it.

It can only be said that the protagonist he created is nothing, resembles nothing, and has no distinctive character or point of view. From this, it can be seen that the author even created the character image in order to enrich the plot. Others use the plot to create the character image. The author created the image to be nothing in order to enrich the plot. If it can be used, it is a little bit.

Tried, highly poisonous, do not enter. If you don't have the ability to write a medium to advance the plot of the Noumenon Sect, don't write it. You have to use marriage as a medium. Jiang Nannan's position is very delicate. From beginning to end, the fiancée is useless except to advance the plot and serve as a backdrop for Jiang Nannan and the protagonist. Apart from occasionally walking and chatting in the academy, she doesn't write any emotional lines. She uses a cousin who uses Zigong instead of thinking as a soul guide light bulb. , And plug-ins are basically not written. I said before that I should pay attention every month and remember that simulation is like farting. In the past few months, I haven't written a single word about it. The author is purely Sandiao Wen. It's really uncomfortable if I don't criticize you. It's like Jiang Nannan and the mistress. They occasionally chatted in front of Wei Xue and flirted and had ambiguities when they were alone. It would be better not to have a female protagonist from the beginning, and the emotional line is just a mess.

I'm going to vomit 🤮

There are many poisonous points, the setting is good at the beginning, the theme is novel, but there is too much nonsense, a lot of typos, the holes are not filled in, and the emotional creation of the characters is also rubbish. The cat in the second soul ring is like ZZ, and there is no role later. It is purely disgusting to write this, many original characters have been ignored, Huo Yuhao did not mention it at all after he obtained the second martial soul, the semi-artifact bronze bell mentioned in the beginning did not have any effect, and the star iron activation at the end embarrassed me to death.

Douluo female channel male protagonist, this track is still too narrow. Fantasy novels are too delicate, and they really want to portray the protagonist as beautiful, strong and tragic, which is in line with the prejudice against female authors. With a naughty writing style and a naughty protagonist, male videos have not yet developed into the "soft and cute" literature.

Nice ending, okay

The writing style is average, and some parts are particularly ink-filled. For example, there are 5 chapters describing the battle. There must be 3 chapters describing irrelevant things, which can make people anxious to death.

It's good-looking, but it's just too little, not enough.