Swallowed Star: Lord of Treasure Refining

Assassination in Chaos City, the Lord of Chaos City didn't know about it😱, awesome

There's a lot of nonsense, the protagonist can't take more than 10 shots at most, everything else is just nonsense.

Go and drive screws, you really can't afford to write a book.

It's so procrastinating that I have to write thousands of words to explain many things, and I doubt the author has ever seen Devouring. Doesn't he know that a spiritual master is a much higher level than a warrior? The protagonist warrior is a high-level God of War, but the spiritual master is the invincible God of War? Also, his inheritance teacher increased his genes to 100 times before, and then doubled them again?

The writing is so-so, I'm pretty good at bragging.

Overall it's pretty good. It's just that I feel like the writing is too detailed in some places, and it's not necessary at all.

I talked too much. I've read several of the first few pictures. I haven't finished them after reading them for a long time.

Too much nonsense

Really annoying

I can't tell who is the protagonist anymore. Although you don't write that kind of cool novel, you also don't keep licking it. I can't tell whether this is a brotherly relationship or if I follow the original route and copy it.