Swallowed Star: Lord of Treasure Refining

The back is completely broken, what white, orange, and yellow talents are a joke, and efforts like this have become a joke. Only chance, will, and even a bit of luck can create an immortal. The top human beings select the top one from the 10,081 higher universe countries every five thousand years. Thousands of people, only a few can become immortal after being carefully cultivated, and even tens of thousands of people may not be able to produce a single venerable. The protagonist just scans an ordinary planet a few times, and well, he finds several orange geniuses (venerable-level geniuses), and thousands of geniuses who can become immortal, which is simply funny. Protect the earthlings like a nanny, just a bunch of greenhouse flowers, and it's crazy to be able to cultivate strong people. Luo Feng's mission and adventures are all gone. Nuolan Mountain, Golden Horn Behemoth Crisis, Leiting World Adventure are all gone. These are all the hardships that Luo Feng must go through to become a strong man. Now they are all gone. The protagonist takes care of Luo Feng well and carefree. Without the pressure of human beings on earth being enslaved and exterminated all the time, Luo Feng is also useless. It would be great if he can become immortal.

Everyone is welcome to scold me, your advice is my honor.

Writing Devouring from the perspective of refining treasures seems pretty good, but I don't know what will happen next. I hope I won't always take risks like other fans. After all, the route is different, right? Moreover, the protagonist's talent is so flawed and the cheats are so big, there is no need to go out to get opportunities. It is best to enter the initial universe and directly go through the 18th floor to break through the realm master, obtain permanent residence, and expose the talent of treasure refining. Even if the earth is exposed in the process, it will not be a big problem. Um~ This is a different idea, I hope it won't affect the author.

To be honest, this book is not bad, but the protagonist is really a failure. I saw the genius battle and couldn't help but comment on it, deliberately controlling points just to be with my girlfriend. If you want to be a strong man, do you still care about the love between your children? Are women that important? I really don't understand. It's not like we can't meet each other, we can meet in the virtual universe as well. I don't quite understand.

The author's attitude is good enough, but the beginning is too wordy.

Tomato has a background in science and engineering. The protagonists in his books basically follow one another, and the original protagonist in the fanfic is basically useless. In the Earth era, those who boasted about Luo Feng's talent were blind. There were no settings such as heavenly spiritual roots and earthly spiritual roots in Devouring Starry Sky. What was important was to break through one's own limits. I had headaches when I was a child, 100 billion bounty, Nolan Mountain Crisis, Golden Horned Behemoth Crisis, Genius Battle, Secret Mission, Earth Exposure, Herodo Group, etc. I have been training myself and breaking through my limits. When the Star Tower recognized its master, it ushered in its own transformation. After that, the Ancestral God Sect and the first cosmic wandering, and the primitive star killing all directions represented growth. The first exploration of the cosmic sea was a broadening of vision and training. Until the Duandonghe inheritance, it ushered in three consecutive breakthroughs of its own limits and the explosion of life and death crisis in the final inheritance. Then there is the second cosmic wandering and the precipitation of the ancestor of the starry sky beasts, and then the tempering and growth of the world of Jin. Finally, the third cosmic wandering in the World Beast Crisis truly broke through, and even laid a certain foundation for his later achievement as Lord Chaotic Source. The Secret Book of Nine Tribulations made up for and sublimated Luo Feng's foundation. Luo Feng's original talent was average from beginning to end. The law of gold relies on the golden-horned giant beast, the law of space relies on the avatar of the Demon Slayer clan and the heart of space, the law of golden and sky fusion relies on the blood crystal formed from the blood of the golden beast god after its death, and the secret method of creation relies on the secret pattern pattern. The protagonists of Tomato novels basically break through themselves step by step and finally reach the top through a series of opportunities and inheritances. Luo Feng initially received only a third-rate immortal inheritance, only entered the Taichu Secret Realm, and then upgraded to the original level. Ji Ning began to worship at the Black and White Academy, which did not even have immortals. Lin Lei went through all kinds of hardships to enter the Four Divine Beasts family, whose main god died and was facing the crisis of annihilation. However, Luo Feng has a mountain guest behind him, Ji Ning has Sanshou and Bodhi behind him, and Lin Lei has Beirut behind him.

Do you really want to write good Devouring fan fiction? An excellent Devouring fan fiction at least complies with the unproblematic settings of the original work and writes its own thing. The fewer problems I describe, the better. On the contrary, the more problems you have, it will basically not attract readers. If it is just a piece of writing that is too popular and makes you tired, it would be better for you and me to give up early. The first major issue of devouring combat power system The first realm issue: You can look at Tongtianqiao in the early stage. The 10th floor is equal to the immortal realm, the 15th floor is equal to the title of a lord, the 18th floor is equal to the immortal king, and the 21st floor is equal to the venerable. Although the higher realm increases the combat power, it is not all. Comparable in terms of pure realm cannot compete with the real deal. The energy level itself cannot be ignored, and the realm accounts for half of the energy level. For example, the original book describes that Ke Di broke through the 20th floor of the Realm Lord Tongtian Mountain, and he had to barely kill the 15th level of the feudal lord without good equipment. In terms of realm, he had to be 5 levels higher than the feudal lord to even out the energy level gap. In the original work, Luo Feng passed the 16th floor of the Domain Lord Tongtian Mountain and broke through. When the Realm Lord's ninth-level armor is worn, it will give 1,000 Realm Lords the power to fight the Army Lord for immortality, and to give the armor to 10,000 Realm Lords, to fight the feudal princes for immortality, and to wear the Chaos Golden Wings, which will not be inferior to the Immortal in terms of speed. In terms of (realm, energy level, speed), this is the real leapfrog. The second point is the issue of energy level and size: Immortality and above are called divine power. Divine power can be divided into quality and quantity. Divine power can refer to quality, and quantity refers to the size of your divine body. Gene multiples also refer to the upper limit of divine power and quality. For example, 1 times the peak of genetic immortality is 100,000 divine power, and 10081 is the perfect gene. Because of the 1008.1 Million divine power, the same level of perception is tens of thousands times stronger than 1x the gene. The difference in divine power is like E-grade metal and G-grade metal. King Immortal can easily evaporate thousands of meters of E-grade metal, but cannot shake G-grade metal even if it is the size of a marble. This is the difference in divine power. The 100,000 genes of the divine power route are both great improvements in quality and quantity, especially the quantity The first level is 1 million kilometers tall The second level is 100 million kilometers tall The third level is light years tall and has a divine body weight The fourth level is 12 light years old and has a divine body weight I can't think of it. Think about the volume of the divine power of the Nine Nether Sea that turns into a spherical light-year light-year The volume of the divine power is based on the standard volume of one hundred thousand kilometers of the Law Come True God. A height of 1 million is 1,000 times the volume of 100,000. A height of 100 million kilometers is one billion of the volume of 100,000. Let's not talk about the light-year divine body, let's just say that the first level of the divine power route = the standard amount of 1000 true gods of law. If you are at the same level and the same realm, you can exchange 1 blood for 1 blood to kill the opponent. You still have 99.9% Of the divine power. If you don't take the divine power route, the opponent will be your big-level limit in all aspects. You must be 2 major-level limit realms higher to even the gap between you and a big-level energy level. Unexpectedly, It would be extremely poisonous to be able to reach 2 higher realms and still be stuck at a higher level. If you don't use the power of God, it would be 100,000 to break through the True God's mini-universe and it wouldn't reach 1 billion. It would be extremely poisonous after a set of operations. The third level issue: No matter what kind of plot content you want to write, don't forcefully write a battle plot that exceeds 2 major levels. The battle power is huge and extremely poisonous. Even if you go beyond one major level, it must be well-reasoned and well-founded. Each major level itself is to a certain extent (realm, energy level, speed, field of view, strike range), not to mention the gap between two major levels. This is not an urban novel, nor is it a low-level martial arts novel where you can use tricks to jump through a few levels and still kill indiscriminately. This is where you can practice and understand the laws of the universe. The background of the high-power Devouring Starry Sky novel The second major numerical issue Let's talk about the currency unit of Devouring Li first 1 Supreme Treasure = 3000-4000 Heavy Treasure Points are floating 1 Heavy Treasure Point = 1 trillion Hunyuan 1 Hunyuan = 1 trillion Cosmic Coin, 1 Cosmic Coin = 3300 Qianwu Coin 1 Qianwu Coin = 1000 Black Dragon Coin, 1 Black Dragon Coin = 1000 Silver Blue Coin The price of a living planet is 3 trillion Black Dragon Coins, there are 210,000 living planets in the Milky Way, and the price of a living planet will not exceed the cosmic currency. Over 910,000, 210,000 life balls are equivalent to 191.1 Billion cosmic coins. The price of a galaxy in the auction does not exceed 1 mixed yuan. There are 668 galaxies in the star field that are auctioned at high prices for only 1,000 mixed yuan. After reading 7 chapters and 18 chapters, the world owner can only use one galaxy as his territory. One Hunyuan can probably produce hundreds of millions of C9-level standard spaceships, tens of thousands of D9-level standard spaceships, and one E-level standard spaceship. For unclear reference, the C5-level spaceship sold for 12.8 Billion black dragon coins in Chapter 40 of Part 5 and the peak E9-level spaceship in Chapter 15 of Part 7 only cost 100 Hunyuan. The third major logic and setting problem The original star cannot teleport into the dark universe in the original universe. No matter where in the original universe, the power cannot exceed the sixth level. Only the combined attack of multiple people can exceed the sixth level power. Some authors have forced the setting of the original work to have no sixth level power limit, thinking it is a cool point, but it is actually a poisonous point. The pre-immortality realm can be divided into four major levels Basic - Artistic Concept - Domain - World The corresponding ones are star level, universe level, domain lord level, and world lord level If the star does not know the basics, there is no hope of breaking through the universe level, and the domain lord does not know the domain, there is no hope of breaking through the world lord level. If you don't understand, read 5 articles and 17 chapters The original universe has no upper limit on the speed of light in the dark universe, The speed is not affected per second: the ninth level of the star planet level It reaches 10 kilometers, the ninth-level star level reaches 150 kilometers, the ninth-level cosmic level reaches 1,000 kilometers, the ninth-level domain lord reaches 10,000 kilometers, the ninth-level world lord reaches 150,000 kilometers, and the immortal reaches the speed of light 300,000 kilometers. The original universe cannot exceed the speed of light. When the speed of the military master to the king and beyond is based on the initial speed explosion gap, in the universe sea, the master of the universe can reach a hundred times the speed of light, and the speed god can reach a million times the speed of light. Teleport: Immortality is several light years away, the Venerable is 1,000 light years away, the Lord of the Universe is 10,000 light years away, and the True God is 1 million light years away. The original cosmic units are from large to small: star regions. Star regions. Galaxies. Solar systems The human race has 1008 star regions and higher cosmic countries, such as the star region and the high-level witch kingdom, which has more than 13,000 star regions and hundreds of millions of galaxies. The star regions are such as the medium-sized Black Dragon Mountain Empire. There are more than 8,000 galaxies, including eight galaxies under the control of the Elementary Silver-Blue State. For example, the Milky Way has a size of 100,000 light-years in the Silver-Blue State. Some people write the distance scale poorly, as if they have not gone out to face each other in the background of the universe. It is ridiculous to say that the distance is very far away. Also, the concepts of each major level of power in the original work are described In the context of the universe, it is still written in an urban style. It is funny to go out and say that you are immediately discovered and fought by major forces. In the context of Devouring the Universe, only the direct participants and affiliated forces know that the aftermath of the battle light erupting from the Immortals will affect all the world lords and below to the Death Capital. If the battle between the strong in Immortals affects tens of millions of kilometers and hundreds of millions of kilometers, there is no such thing as eating. People, the writing is logical and funny The low-level writing method is also funny, such as killing ordinary people by killing the domain lord with headshots and blowing away the immortal body to death. You don't understand the original work at all and write it blindly. The most important thing is to write and devour the fans and randomly change some basic settings. According to Dinghe's description, for example, the most slaves are at the universe level, and the domain masters and above have life cores that will not kill them if they hit the head, and they can get rid of the slave chip. There are plots of selling the world master for 50 hunyuan. Let me tell you, even the ninth level of the elite world master recognized by the law is worth only 10 hunyuan. Breaking through reincarnation will only break through the real void within 3 reincarnations. The Queen of the Void's requirement to enter reincarnation within one year has nothing to do with your realm. Even if you have the realm of God King, you can stay for 3 reincarnations without breaking through the void. Even a spaceship with 1 times the speed of light can escape in an hour. The range of 1.08 Billion kilometers and 1 billion light-years is far more than 10,000 large and small galaxies. It can hold the size of 1 trillion galaxies. It can only be said that the concept of space in the mind is one line at a time. Understanding it in the form of one line can indeed only hold 10,000 galaxies. The first picture is the description of the original work. The second picture starts with the chapters that I collected from all kinds of poisonous and outrageous descriptions of the fandoms. The math is not enough to describe it. The Lord of the Universe surpassed 2 large levels and killed 3 True Gods of the Void. The original God of the Void completes the small universe from 10 billion to 20.5 Billion. I thought it was a great basic setting. It said that the true god in the void level was forced to go through reincarnation. There were logical problems in the plot of selling garbage to the slaves of the realm master and selling a random number of 50 Hunyuan. Immortality shocked the domain master's domain power. He was forced to be at the venerable level and the sixth-level combat power was set blindly. He really didn't understand the original combat power system. If there was no limit on the number of pictures, I could send dozens of pictures

The introduction is too long. Is the introduction of dozens of chapters interesting? And I didn't see the Lian Bao, I just saw that the seller was showing off.

There's no way this book will be a hit, not even Jesus can help, I'm telling you. Basically every chapter introduces and describes wealth, plug-ins, abilities, ideas, etc. There is basically no main plot, and there are no side plots. What is there is all kinds of descriptions that are afraid of hiding them.

After reading your resume, I thought you were awesome. I thought you were starting outside the Earth. But when I looked at the catalog, it was Earth Start again, and it was Luo Feng's Neighbor. I gave up immediately. I have read too many of these fanfics. I have read eight out of ten. Now if I don't write something different about the Devouring fanfic, who will read it if I still write about the Earth Start? New talents will read it, just like the Dou Po fanfic back then, no. If you want to write something different, why don't you read other completed books? What's the difference between what you wrote and what they wrote? Earth's genius fights against the original secret realm of Chaos City and then the extraterrestrial battlefield, etc. There's nothing different. I haven't read the original Devouring, but those who read the fanfic can tell you what happened one by one. There are too many of these fanfics at the starting point. If you look for it, you can find ten or eight books with exactly the same route.