The Ninja Who Was Burned to Death by Fire Escape in Konoha

It's average, it has some new ideas, but it doesn't make you want to read on. It's too lengthy to read. It's basically conspiracy and plotting, with a bit of farming attributes. If it's too much, I'll get tired of it, and I'll basically skip it.

The overall story is too bland, but the plot design is very interesting and the details are very good. There are too many original characters, their names are hard to remember, and it's confusing to read. The collapse of combat power was so severe that shadow levels were flying all over the sky, and even Black Zetsu had reached the sixth level. It felt a bit unfinished at the end, the ending was too hasty.

There are a lot of unknown characters, and the sand shadow has no sense of substitution, and the pig's feet are not hanging yet, how to play?

If you want to write something original, write something original. But you ended up using Naruto as the background and using the characters in it to write a new story. I was confused and the plot was a bit bland, which kept me jumping.