Konoha: My Experience in the Ninja World

The analysis of the Sarutobi regime is well-founded and a highlight. The shortcomings are also obvious. The dead NPCs repeatedly fake corpses, Uchiha Setsuna and the two Toad Sage. The former can be said to be a habitual mistake, but the two toads' fake corpses are just a book. Generally speaking, you can take a look.

This early stage is like the real situation in the Naruto world. In the final analysis, Sarutobi Hiruzen and Danzo are just trying to kill dissidents in the name of justice. Itachi is also a brainwashed psychopath. How can normal people kill the entire family that was forced to rebel by Konoha?

The early stage was okay, but there was a lot of nonsense in the middle and late stages and there was less plot.

Brother, you are not even considered a Hokage anymore, you have changed a bit fiercely. . . I can see that you feel frustrated when watching Naruto and want to change a lot of things 😂😂 You have changed a Hokage into that dynasty type 😂😂😂 I can see that you are eager for these competitions

My writing skills are a bit weak! The characters couldn't stand up well, and the plot was too childish. Originally, Danzo, the Third, and Itachi were killed! It really suits me! But you do have a lot of room for improvement.

It's good to read, but it criticizes the world view quite a lot. At first, the criticisms, the speeches, etc. Are quite irritating, but once you say it, it seems like nonsense. Everything else is good.

The early stage was good, but there was too much analysis. The protagonist should be called Uchiha MLM.

It's a brainless novel. You also changed some settings.

Water is outrageous

Open high and go low, counterattack at the beginning, and use the private setting of the eternal eye. In more than a hundred chapters, someone suddenly appears and goes back with the power of this world. Why is it so confusing? Just a panel, saying that the liver is still alive, the four battles are over, the Sharingan is still the three magatama