Devouring the Starry Sky: Copying into God

Chapter 37: This oil is so funny. In the wonderful reading just now, the reader has also realized his own unique feeling. It has not been fully formed yet, but the reader has a rough understanding in his heart. It is not particularly specific, but it gives the reader a feeling of "oil". This kind of "oil" also represents the writing style of this book, which is good at finding strange and exciting points in the narrative. Even if it encounters an unfamiliar plot, the outline is extremely good. The writing seems to be under control, and the description is very broad in perspective and far-reaching calculation.

It sounds like there is a lot of nonsense here, but the meaning is still the same after explanation. It is very clear and clear in one sentence, but he insists on talking about unnutritious topics. What's the saying? There's not enough content, just fill it in with nonsense.

If I had half the innate abilities of the protagonist, let alone the cosmic-level immortal-level wire grass, wouldn't I be able to become the King of Peak Motorcycle Cloud Vine? Oh, if you have the ability, don't use it, just rely on the main body's clone combat power, so don't waste it! You're both selfish and show off, what are you doing?

Ugly, rubbish, virgin male protagonist, various costumes 13

Nice

Seriously, when you write fan works, you should at least understand the core points of the original work. You have written such core points as secrets, combat skills, and laws in a mess. It will only improve your physical fitness, and your understanding of the laws will go straight to the 9th level without any description. Go and see how the original work describes it

There are too many introductions, and they all have the talent to copy, and they still have to seize Luo Feng's opportunity. The universe is so big and there are so many opportunities, author, can't you write something fresh?

The sea! It's all water, it's nonsense and the ideas are not clear at all. There is no sense of substitution. The further you go, the more speechless you get. A meaning that has already been expressed needs to be said again and again.

The protagonist is mentally immature and too virginal

There is no soul, the subject matter is great, it is ruined, especially, after saving a stranger, he puts his arms around the waist of a strange woman and walks forward in seconds? Oh my God, you have to be brainless? Return to the Holy Mother