Konoha's Magical Power Is Invincible

It's really bullshit to think of the ninja world as a conspiracy. It's easy for the protagonist to show off his strength and get killed easily. It all depends on the protagonist's halo. The author also said it's not a case of overpowering the combat power. It's bullshit.

Yes, and the running account

It can be regarded as one of the few good fanfics. The plot is coherent, The characters are close to the original work, The writing is smooth, The time scale is well controlled, the context is clear, not too abrupt, and there is no drama in the writing. The only flaw is that it is a bit bland. Although there are a lot of emotional writing, it still accounts for too little of the total length.

It feels very strange. The character of the author is like a tool man, the kind of free worker.

The further I look at it, the more disgusting it becomes. My own magical powers are mediocre, and everyone is so noble. During the actual battle, the performance is inconsistent. The plot is sometimes targeted by this, and sometimes framed by that, which makes people irritated to watch. ; In terms of combat power, except for the moments when he was abusing food, he was instantly beaten, and the rest of the time, no matter how many times he met the enemy, he fought hard, suffered serious injuries, and became blind; there were also many times when the male protagonist was talking nonsense, which felt too watery.

It was pretty good at first, but then it got too bland.

It's all frustrating!

I have never used my natal magic power very much, and my performance in battle is poor. There are wordless books and plug-ins, and my performance is so low.

It's written as an oriental fantasy, why should I write a fanfic?

In other words, there is something wrong with this protagonist, and he feels like his IQ is extremely low. It's inconsistent, the previous magical power is so awesome, but it's written like a piece of shit, I don't know why it has such a high rating.