The Rise of the Vortex Kingdom of Konoha

There is already a system, and the writing is so frustrating. Why don't you just delete the system? I hate talking about benevolence, justice, morality and peace. I suggest changing this system to the Holy Mother system. The plot is boring and dragging.

There is really a lot of nonsense. What I want to see is the development of the plot, not all kinds of long-winded explanations of why it is written this way.

Too watery

What the hell, the system was released in more than ten chapters. There is a chapter introducing the system. The novice gift pack is just an experience card with various restrictions. Having a system is worse than not having a system. Originally, the Uzumaki clan grew quickly, but with various restrictions of the system, the article is full of nonsense and cannot explain a single thing in one chapter.

Generally

Water, unhappy,

Xiaobaishui calligraphy

It's not a cool article, sometimes I can't understand it

Ninja version of a bumpkin from the countryside

I always like to jump here and there without any coherence.