Douluo: Shocked, I Became Bibi Dong

It's good to read, but it's a bit extreme like the original work. The original work is extremely masculine, but this book is just the opposite. The protagonist only cares about female geniuses. Male geniuses such as Feng Xiaotian and Xie Yue are completely abandoned. In the original work, men almost dominate the world, but this book has become Wuhun. The female soul master of the palace dominates the world, and even Hu Liena completely abandoned this dependent brother. The divine world has also changed from the back garden of the Tang family to the Wuhun Palace Girls Association. It is a bit too extreme like the original work. I quite like Xie Yue, but he was abandoned in the end. It is a pity.

Disadvantages: There are too many typos, too many characters have been added, and many characters are too saucey. For example, the setting of An Yue is very good. She has her own ideas, her own background, and her own growth, rather than being a mere tool. The protagonist is a girl, but unfortunately there is no emotional description. The other settings are still very good, and the protagonist is also relatively decisive. He should kill when he should, but there is no Virgin, so it is still worth watching.

It's a great fanfic. It's the first time I've read it from Bibi Dong's perspective. It's very fresh and the writing is also good! It's just that there are some typos that are a bit annoying, but the original content added is also good (there's King Da Mao, good review!!!). This fanfic is a good 10 or even 9 out of 10! ! !

It's well written and the plot is exciting. Especially the final ending, I feel the best. Very top-notch fanfic. ♡(.◜ω◝.)♡

There is one for every sentence Well, there are at least 20,000 words in 1.5 Million words.

Finished reading. I rate this book ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐. The plot is very exciting, but the word count is not very good. There is no male protagonist, but the female protagonist is the heroine who traveled through time. No harem. The conclusion is also well written. Although Tang San was suppressed, there was no poisonous plot in the early stage where Tang San was killed but Tang San was rescued repeatedly. The settings of other literary works were not forced into the book, but were localized without any sense of inconsistency (the author said that the prototypes of several people came from his previous works). The relationship between the characters is handled well and the protagonist's relationship is just right for the development of the plot, but at the same time, it will not directly kill Tang San, the main thread that drives the plot. The IQ of the characters in this book is online. After the three people in the Sword Bone Tower were killed by the Wuhun Palace, Ning Rongrong knew right from wrong and surrendered. In the end, he helped the Wuhun Palace and undercover Tang San's forces. I rarely finish a novel. This book is quite good, and the number of chapters is in line with expectations. It is a novel worth recommending.

You can obviously kill them directly! ! They must be allowed to live and collapse in front of the heroine! ! Others get 20 to 30 levels in two or three years! ! The heroine's salary doesn't rise even in two or three years! ! Others are level 10-50, the heroine is level 98, others are level 50-98! ! The heroine is still level 98! ! Forcefully suppress the level every day! Wisdom comes down every day, Holy Mother! ! You must find various excuses to release the enemy! ! She can't make a move unless the enemy rises from level 1 to the same level as her, right? ? While saying that soul rings are no longer important after level 90, at the same time, you can only upgrade soul rings by completing levels every day! ! The level has gone up! ! All kinds of clown enemies jump around in front of her every day! ! She can always find all kinds of excuses not to kill! ! There are more than 450 chapters and the level has not been improved! ! Is there any use in taking the hair test every day? ! The Garbage God in the Garbage God Test! Brag about how awesome you are! ! The prizes for the divine test are not as rich as a second-level god! ! She has a bunch of level 99 Ultimate Douluo subordinates! ! Her opponent is only level 88~96! Just don't take action! ! Water words every day! ! The writing is messy! ! My own apprentice's various immortal and divine examinations, the initial level is 5 to 7 levels higher than Tang Gou San! ! Two years later, Tang Gou had no immortality and no divine examination! Looking back, I saw that he was almost level 50 with her apprentice! ! So it's useless for a disciple to eat immortal products and take the divine examination? I'm really convinced! ! Forcefully suppress the level every day! ! Rubbish article! ! Bad writing! !

Overall, it's okay, but there are too many typos. However, one problem is that it was initially set to be Bibi Dong dressed as a man. As a result, the whole book did not show any difference in male clothing. It looked very strange. It would be better to just set it as a female or Bibi Dong to be reborn directly.

It's pretty good. The protagonist is a girl, not some inexplicable stud story.

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