Battle Through the Heavens: Three Years of Sign-In, Then I Won the Goddess's Heart

Was it copied? The main reason is that the conflict in the content is too serious. The protagonist and Xiao Yan are in a hostile relationship. Why did the Soul Palace suddenly appear and arrest his most important Yao Lao and his father? Wasn't the protagonist adopted by Yun Yun since childhood? Are you sure you didn't copy too much? There are also some people who suddenly appear, and some things that fight against Xiao Yan are inexplicably the protagonist's doing, but they come up without even mentioning them before. It's really inexplicable.

I would like to suggest that you pay more attention to the content of the original work, otherwise the next time you write a novel of the same type, you will still be so lax. First: the order of the story lines (if the author wants to add other story content, it must be staggered with the integration point of the original work), second: the level and the integration rate of heaven, material and earthly treasures (for example: ① The level promotion must be rigorous, and one will be promoted at a time) ② The absorption and promotion performance of the alien fire level. The Bone Spirit Cold Fire (although it is copied from Yao Lao) is absorbed smoothly, and the Fallen Star Flame (after helping the Queen break through) is ranked 19th. The absorption process is too exaggerated in comparison. ③ There are so many signed skills, you can classify them, such as talents... Too many will be too complicated). Although it is an imaginative article, the elements of it cannot be missed! (Fan humanities)

The story is okay, but the male protagonist is a bit ink, and everyone takes a shower with you, why are you so confused? It's like the male protagonist doesn't understand things between men and women, he's always embarrassed or doesn't know what to do, or feels he's too young, so he can at most touch him. Especially the author wants to write that the male protagonist is a villain, so he must be ruthless and not reject the goddess. Otherwise, if you sign in too much, you can sign in just by touching it.

All are Xiao Yan's plots, even some small plots are copied, but the Yao Lao is replaced by the system, all women are accepted, and the level rises a little faster than the original work. The most bizarre thing is that the fallen heart inflammation is too outrageous. Even if there is a recovery effect, it is tens of thousands of times. Not to mention whether the male protagonist's kidneys are good, Medusa can't stand it, right? It's really outrageous

Basically copied, just changed the name

The writing is average. It can be seen that the author has read the original work, but not much. The plot of this fan fiction is completely copied from the original work. To put it simply, Xiao Yan's name is changed to Ning Luo, and then all the women are included in the harem. The system is of no use. Since you want to write a fan fiction, you should write it in a more enjoyable way. Rather than just accepting all the women he saw, the protagonist mentioned several times that he had read the original work, but the reality is that the protagonist does not know a lot of things. For example, he knows where Zi Yan's father is, but he does not know that there is another fallen Xinyan under the tower. Isn't it ridiculous to ask what is hidden under the tower? I don't object to copying the plot, but at least add some content and change some things. I've read the original work, so don't make the protagonist look like an idiot. He doesn't know this or that. Just change the places that need to be modified. Just increase the level of cultivation. You have to copy Xiao Yan's set. Thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi. Now that the ancient clan can see that they should step up their training, it would be better if the protagonist is very powerful and the ancient clan does not dare to offend them. I don't know what the point of writing this fanfic is. Why not just change the name to the Dou Po Shang Qiong Harem version. The protagonist is still Xiao Yan, but all kinds of women are included, and then copied elsewhere. This can be a hundred times better than the fanfic you wrote yourself.

It can be clearly felt that the content of the original work was fed to the AI, and then it was modified by adding some of its own settings and plot directions. However, there are obviously self-contradictory contents in many details, including paragraphs. Things that were useless at the beginning are suddenly used later. Something that didn't exist suddenly became available. This is indeed a trace generated by AI.

I was so happy that the four-star Dou Zun was demoted to a Dou Zong, and the part of leading people in the Glacier River Valley ended with the Skyfire Lord. The seven-star Dou Zun was beaten by the five-star Dou Zun until he was seriously injured and on the verge of death, and then something even worse happened. One moment he was seriously injured and on the verge of death, the next moment he was drinking and laughing, and the next moment he was seriously injured and recovered from a coma. How funny is that? I can't bear to read Chapter 600. Do you think I'm a mentally retarded baby?

Head pain

The system does not reward strange fires, and it is still timid to grab strange fires. The plot is exactly the same as the original work, which is equivalent to watching the original work again. Starting from about Chapter 100, the system disappeared. In 306, Xun'er has lost her virginity, but in 540, she is afraid of losing her virginity. 539 Panmen came out. 542 Ning Luo said he was from the Xiao family. I just met the Little Medical Fairy. The Little Medical Fairy is a woman from Ningluo. They both met Xun in the Poison Sect and Glacier Valley and became friends with her when they were children. 593 Outrageous: Ning Luo said to Yao Chen: Your apprentice Ning Luo is here to save you. The fighting skills obtained by signing in were never used later. 668 Ning Luo wants to rescue his father. Does he have a father? Furukawa killed in 358 appeared in 668. It's obvious that the time traveler knows the plot behind it, but the more I watch later, the more it seems like I don't know. Ending 809 writes Ning Luo as a member of the Xiao family