I Can Redeem My Understanding

Each realm needs to be introduced several times, should we talk so much nonsense?

The ending is a bit sloppy

The writing is delicate and the level of thought is high! ! !

It's very good to watch, but it would be nice if the main character could have more handsome scenes.

It's still a little bit far from good. The first half is pretty good, but the second half is a bit messy, especially the realm.

The exchange rules need to be introduced every time you need to use them. Once you have a system, it seems like there won't be a slight difference every time~

Overall, there is no big problem, but I feel a little lacking in feeling. It may be due to my habit of reading.

Not good

Although there are some logical loopholes, it is still very beautiful despite the flaws.

It's really good.